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Sunlight Rays
Love is Love, Pride is Pride, People is People. Be who you are, for there are no wrong answers in who you want to be. 21 yo trans girl, bi/poly.
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Hello to all of those who read this story! As you can see, I've only posted two chapters, just to see how you react to it. Criticism and comments are always welcome, and if you liked this story, go ahead and press that 'track' button, as there are more chapters to come!
P.S. Yes, I've already written out several more chapters beyond these, even though the story isn't finished yet. If you have personal suggestions or ideas, feel free to PM me!
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Please! Post more! I need to know what happens!
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Don't worry, chapter 5 is being written as we speak. As of now, I reckon it's about 80~90% written. After that, I'll read it through several times to see if there are any flaws with it. In other words, you can expect chapter 5 to be released within a few days: quite a bit earlier than expected!
i feel like this is going to be a good story.
You have a nice writing style and i do like how there is a bigger thing forming slowly as i read.
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If you have any critiques or questions about the story, feel free to leave a comment!
Glad that you enjoyed it!
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i just finished reading.
amazing. But i would have liked to have a longer emotional part. As soon as i really started to feel lightnings pain while reading it, the story ended.
still amazing.
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Hm. That is a valid point.
Well, I guess that's a limit that comes from keeping my chapters short. But don't worry, starting from chapter 6 each chapter will be a bit longer than the previous ones. I will keep your comment in mind as well.
By the way, thanks for the compliment!
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Thanks, i really enjoyed chapter 6, slowly the story begins to puzzle itself together. I have no criticism, its really good.
Im looking forward to see some dark stuff in the next chapters, i really love it when the main characters take you down the spiral with them.
I hope the other chapters will shatter my soul to pieces. (In a good way tho)
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Um, thanks...?
I appreciated the fact that you were enjoying this; it's what drives me to write these things.
What I did not expect was to see you say "hope the other chapters will shatter my soul to pieces". I almost choked on air when I first saw that. Whether it was out of shock or amusement, I honestly don't know.
Anyways, I have a basic outline planned for Chapters 7~10 and Chapter 7 is currently in the works. And I'll tell you, Lightning will suffer...
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Just think nothing of it. i also think its wierd but i like it when a story gives me depressive feelings. thats why i like sad fictions they drag me down with them.
Im perfectly fine, so no worries please. take it with humor
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I never thought it was weird. Heck, most of the fics I've read on this site probably have the Suicide/Self-Harm tag attached. I understand the feeling you get from reading those. It's just that I never expected someone to be this blunt.
On a side note, I'd like to thank you for all the support you're giving me. Your last comment reinvigorated my drive to continue writing when I was starting to have doubts about where this story was headed. During the last three days, I managed to put down 2844 words, not including the words I've written and then deleted; almost two-thirds of what I've written for the past month. I wouldn't have been able to do this without your comments. Thank you.
*picks up pieces of shattered soul*
Since i read your autors note i cant stop smiling, you really made my day. Maybe my whole week.
“Ain’t that clear enough for you? Fine, I’ll spell it out for you."
I felt a bit like that line was speaking directly to me.
Maybe lightning is getting a bit scizophrenic hearing all those voices.
This is an awesome chapter and im playing with the thought to record a reading of it.
edit: changed my mind i hate my own voice and cant stand editing it
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Hmm, more like a severe case of PTSD, or post-traumatic stress disorder. PTSD can appear in a wide range of symptoms after a traumatizing event and can be dangerous as once triggered causes rational thoughts to cease. The most painful part of those with PTSD, however, is the fact that it never seems to stop. It feels like there's no exit for them, no way for them to leave their past behind and live on with their lives. That no matter what they do, hellfire will continue to rage inside their minds.
Also, don't mention it. You helped me in making progress when I was stuck and starting to have doubts. If it weren't for you, this story probably would have gotten bogged down somewhere in the middle of chapter 7.
Aww, that's too bad. I would have liked to get a reading of my story since I wouldn't care about how the reader's voice sounds.
Still, it's your decision, I won't push you to do it. Not that I can, anyways.
P.S. Thinking about it, maybe I should have titled this chapter 'Hellhole', seeing the situation Lightning's in. Eh, I already published it, and it wouldn't really fit into the titles of later chapters.