When Applejack and Rainbow Dash end up together under the influence of several drinks following Twilight's coronation as ruler of Equestria, how does Rarity take it?
Female Writer, Bisexual Writer, Smolder X Mare Crackship Connoisseur. Creator of the Smolderverse, and writer of many other kinds of clop and SFW stories (Commissions temporarily OPEN)
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Tragedy? How?
I've read a couple of your stories before, and I have to say I've been getting the same vibe from almost all of them. I don't really have much to vote on for them because while you do write some nice fluff I've happily upvoted, most of your stories try for serious topics and queer themes. However, they're all done in so few words that it doesn't support the exploration of the themes very much. A lot of the time emotion, character voices, and too much telling get in the way of the story. It feels like a few hours of work with how frequently you post and can make it hard to get engaged. I would suggest reading the site writing guide and really working on making your stories much longer and more fleshed-out. Adding them to more groups also helps get the stories attention and feedback.