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Hi, I'm someone lazy and I have the tendency to write OP charactcers in my stories. Also I'm a normie because Fluttershy is seriously best pony.


[Displaced] A young brony went to a convention but didn't cosplay, he was just visiting until he met the merchant who sold him Galeem's Core and Darkhon's eye, after buying it, he was transported to Equestria.

He woke up in the Everfree Forest, just after Twilight was captured by Tempest Shadow, now that he can turn to the embodiement of both light and darkness, what will he do?

A little story I write for fun (like all the ones I do).

Chapters (9)
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Comments ( 47 )

Love it now continue

Iโ€™m very interested

Wait, wouldn't this make him a bit... overpowered? Not unless you got rid of the whole 'they can mass produce master/crazy hand/other fighters' bit.

Lol don't worry, the whole overpowered thing is intentional and no sorry, there wont be any fighters, only Steve and the hands... Maybe.
Let's not spoil :raritywink:

As long as he is able grow as a character, doesn't master his powers easily, and that he still acts like a human and makes mistakes like one. Speaking of hands, seeing your story made me think about trying to reboot my Master/Crazy hand displaced.

Why is the random sciency stuff there? :rainbowhuh:

like I said,random idea

Please Sir may I have More

No, you just said don't ask :derpytongue2:

Oh ok just a casual ursa major...this is fine

Great sothat powerful that blast .

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

Please, don't go around posting 'First' comments. It is very annoying and provides no feedback nor constructive criticism for the author.

in the Everfree Forest, just after Twilight was captured by Tempest Shadow,

When did that happen in the movie?

It's been so long I don't even remember, maybe when Tempest came in with her ship near the sea where the hippogriffs were to capture Twilight. Yeah that's when Twilight was being scold by the other main 6 because she messed up big time trying to steal Queen Novo's magic orb.

Comment posted by The Corset deleted January 1st

Right after Twi tried to steal from the Hippogriffs and failed proceeded to yell at her friends and get kidnapped by Tempest and shoved in a cage hovering over lava in a blimp while Tempest sang Open up Your Eyes. That's when.

Exactly! (Even though I didn't watch the movie, I just watched part of it.)

... Yellow herb? You mean wheat?

Eh when I like a movie enough I can remember and list of most moments of it.

Wait no stop STOP, too many memes, it's 9pm here I can't believe you've done this

That is my reaction to this chapter

I feel you man (or are you a man?), even I don't believe I wrote this

Little tip, slow down a little and try to think about what your writing and what you want to write before you slap it on a digital piece of paper and publish it

*Inhale* That's the thing, like Steve, I thought hardcore about the future, but nope, too much going on in my head plus I'm out of memes.

The slow down part I already started but I can't seem to notice that went to the path of sanic instead of sans when I'm writing so yeah. Thanks for the tips (even thought I didn't need it.... baka.)

Well if you need to refresh on memes, I heard the Internet is a wonderful place for those

Nice chapter (even if it reminded me of myself๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜– dang it i need a psycologist๐Ÿ˜•.) and i also noticed you saying 'baka' ๐Ÿ™‚ are you turning into a tsundere๐Ÿ˜€ jkjk

nicely done work and hope to see some more in the future, even if it may never come or has come depending on when someone reads this๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜
anyway good luck on what may be happening ๐Ÿ˜…โœŒ

Nice chapter but,

โ€œSeriously? You flied from Canterlot all the way here?โ€ She said with her jaw on the floor.

โ€œYeah, I flied here.โ€ I said while showing my sick wings, but unlike the other ponies she just sighed, the other girls noticed us too and started to greet us.

The proper word would be flew.

Yay, the chapter actually has some coherency!
Also, I find it odd that the ponies from Ponyville can't handle the blue screen, but the nobles from Canterlot can?
Also also, if you ever get tired of using the blue screen, you could always use the Red Ring of Death.

oh nice, not bad not bad, also the reason for why Canterlot ponies can deal with blue screens is because they havve to deal with ridiculous things from unbelievable business problems to other high class things, pretty coherent right? Also because I think Ponyvilles ponies panic like everyday because of simple things that are easy to understand. In short, Canterlot got trained because of the paper work and Ponyville is being bullied by the world so they didn't actually got to train their brain cells (no offense), Twilight blue screens because it always implies with breaking her reality or with Celestia and Celestia herself isn't used to unpredictable things because she spent a millenia dealing with predictable ponies.

Yes I know, went to deep into character dev.

Thanks for the correction, I was tired at the time, too much things to deal with.

Great chapter ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘Œ hope you try to keep it chill and have some fun with the nokia era memes๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘and do things in your own pace๐Ÿ˜ŒโœŒ

Great chapter ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘Œ hope you try to keep it chill and have some fun with the nokia era memes๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘and do things in your own pace๐Ÿ˜ŒโœŒ

Eh I will admit not the best start but who am I to judge it ain't bad tbh

Fucking storm boi man that entertained me more than it should

I can't even .....whaaaaat!!!???

โ€œNow that I think about it, every OP MC had all the same weakness, their emotions or regrets.โ€

My weakness are emotions

It is so FUNNY!!
Technicly trolling the universe and every day lives in slice of life and WITH the MANE 6 AND THE RULERS IN EQUESTRIA GETTING BLUE SCREENED it was HILARIOUSLY FUNNY! :):rainbowlaugh:

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