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Neutral Boy

First time of writing my own stories on here since the first episode of my little pony friendship is magic.


A lonely boy who just wishes to have a better life than feeling abandoned or forgotten, somehow finds a weird bottle with multiple colors in the park. Unbeknownst to him however, his wish perhaps came true when he'll be in for a surprise of opening this special genie bottle and an adventure begins, including dangers roaming around.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 13 )

Hmm. I like what you’re sellin’. There’s just one problem.

NOT ENOUGH!!!! :coolphoto:

Like not enough girls or what exactly?

Shantae is from the Shantae: Half Genie Hero game. Although originally, her first game & appearance was back in 2002, but her appearances changed years later so yeah. There's a wiki about the Shantae series if you want to go look at it yourself.

Chapters. Sorry. Should have been more clear.

Out of curiosity, when can I expect a new chapter?

Hopefully before or after the end of November. I'm trying to think of the next chapter title for it.

Some advice for future chapters or if you go back to the prologue, try to weave the details into the story rather than just listing them out. Or better way of me saying it, try to have the details connect and not feel separate or disjointed.

The picture for ur story. It's nightmarish with that Shy genie.

Hope you make more as this has potential.

will this story get up dated???

those type of dancers have hips of angels. :raritywink:

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