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MorbidTheBrony


'Ello stranger. Welcome to my little cave. Boy, do I have a story to tell you...

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Honestly, when I first saw this, I expected this to be a Hazbin hotel crossover. I am both pleasantly surprised, as well as slightly disappointed that wasn't the case. I'm adding this to my bookshelf for when it updates. Good job.

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Same as 10392816, I thought it might be Hazbin, but even if it isn't I really like the intro. I'll keep track of it, but I hope you don't just leave it as an experiment, it shows promise!

I'm interested to see where this goes.

Honestly, I'm getting Hazbin Hotel vibes from this. Not that it's a complaint, mind.

I like this. Yes. I like this a lot. And I'm already getting the yuri vibes too, so I like it even more!

I really can't wait for the next chapter.

I love this already. I would looooove to read more.

Excited to read this’ll be a big project.

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Don't keep my word on this, but I'm gonna say probably in January.

Sunny's got gumption, I'll give her that. Though, I'm not sure if its going to be enough to actually meet the big bad red himself.

From looking at the money for a while for a while, the thought hit her that there was clearly some way to make money, which would mean this place had actual jobs that these things could have. This place was seeming to be more and more like a real world civilisation the longer she thought about it.

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This sounds like a crossover. Is it a crossover?

Another great chapter and happy to hear you have the whole volume planned out :twilightsmile: As always I will eagerly await the next update

Well, that went about as well as could be expected. Too bad arcanist isn't a job in Hell. Unless demons have mages, in which case, you could do that instead Sunny-buns.

Fun times ahead.

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I do get the vibes that others are getting, but no, this isn't a crossover.

Wow, can't believe I missed a story this good. Hoping you would keep working on this. Reminds me of Hazbin hotel a bit too much.

I get the feeling we will be watching sunset turning back into her bully mode when she is in a pickle.

Been wondering why shimmy doesn't have her wings back in her she demon form. Guess we will have to wait if she gets it.

Knowing Shimmy, she probably gain enough rep to run for mayor and actually help make their city abit better. Demons are still jerks but not violently soo. She has that natural charisma to pull it off too if shes determined.

Even if she can't go back to life she could help redeem some demons.. even herself. Be like Charlie, show the demons their inner rainbows.

you're a Maoh Sunset, get used to it

So, Sunny's pre-hell demonic state carried over. Good for her. Hopefully she can find a new job after ditching her post.

"Hmm. Very, very interesting." Doctor Doctor swivelled his chair back around to his desk and began typing at his computer. "I have an idea of what is wrong with you, but before I come to a definitive conclusion, I need to run a few tests on you. Is that okay with you?"

She has main character disease! 🤣🤣

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i wanted to see sunset reaction to "inside of every demon is a rainbow".

This disappoint me.

Do you know crossovers of helluva boss and hazbin hotel with sunset ?

I already know this one.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/484822/equestria-girls-the-radio-demon

again, if Sunset didn't end up in charge of this part of hell atleast, I'd be peeved

I'm honestly surprised that the two demons in the car weren't charlie and vaggie

Would this take place before or after the pilot?

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Neither, this doesn't take place in the Hazbin Hotel universe

While I'm glad Sunset managed to reach Softie, I'm concerned about whoever it was that he contacted.

I hope the other two kids that Sunset turned into demons don't end up in hell. But then again Yahweh in these universes are assholes

Calling it. the other candidate got assassinated and Sunset took over as the new candidate.

Oh Sunny. I just want to give you a hug right now.

Where’s a friendship nuke when you need it

And now I’m curious what would sunset do if she was given a opportunity to just leave hell and return to her old life after making a vow to keep Goliath from power

The story so far is good looking forward to more !

Yay! New chapter. Congrats on nearly a year, can't wait for more.

How many volumes long will this story be?

That was intense. I got serious machamp vibes from The Ogre, though that's not a bad thing.

Hopefully Barb's going to get enough time to recover before her next match.

Nice avatar reference with orges banter with barb or sunset forgot which one but I saw it

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I do also did I ever say devil sunset is cute because she is

For some reason this whole chapter is gives me ‘the road to el Dorado vibes’

Can people do cameos as bounty hunters in future chapters

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