Spike wasn't going to take the time for Storm King to give a stupid answer or for him to beg for his life. "Fuck it." Spike pressed a button on the throne he was sitting on. The button released the chain that was holding Storm King up, letting him fall out of a large hole in his former flag airship.
10170867 Hey big question that I've been wondering for a while now, Shelly and Sheldon, Skystar's clams, how do they have googly eyes if A there is no way glue of any form would be able to dry in the water, and B, where did she even get googly eyes, hippogriffs have been gone long enough for them to be nearly forgotten, and googly eyes are pretty hard to find in the bottom of the ocean, seeing as they actually float.
10170929 Well as for the google eyes the Hippogriffs have only been living under the sea for most of Skystar’s life so chances are that it’s less than say 30 years so it’s not impossible for the google eyes to have existed before the big plunge. Also she makes regular visits to Aris so she could be getting the eyes that had been left there. As for the glue it doesn’t have to have been glue she could be using a form of the adhesives natural sea life use (eg Mussel foot proteins)
Just be careful with our dialogue and sentences, because when Twilight had interpreted Spike, that should have been made into another sentence, not an addition the Spike's.
All in all. This should be interesting! Hell, would love to have Tempest in my lap!
I seen the AMVs of Nefarious andI think you should used them as inspiration for upcoming chapters and the white hair girl reminds of EG Twilight a little
The series has always used this treatment of Spike in the background for laughs and you don't notice because it happens when bigger stuff is happening. It's good to see Spike's point of view.
Can never get enough of your stories
So far it’s great!
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Hey big question that I've been wondering for a while now, Shelly and Sheldon, Skystar's clams, how do they have googly eyes if A there is no way glue of any form would be able to dry in the water, and B, where did she even get googly eyes, hippogriffs have been gone long enough for them to be nearly forgotten, and googly eyes are pretty hard to find in the bottom of the ocean, seeing as they actually float.
I think it's a amazing story
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Well as for the google eyes the Hippogriffs have only been living under the sea for most of Skystar’s life so chances are that it’s less than say 30 years so it’s not impossible for the google eyes to have existed before the big plunge. Also she makes regular visits to Aris so she could be getting the eyes that had been left there. As for the glue it doesn’t have to have been glue she could be using a form of the adhesives natural sea life use (eg Mussel foot proteins)
So a remake of the Movie? Ok.
Just be careful with our dialogue and sentences, because when Twilight had interpreted Spike, that should have been made into another sentence, not an addition the Spike's.
All in all. This should be interesting! Hell, would love to have Tempest in my lap!
wow...………… talk about a new way for spike.
*immediately tracking this*
any story when spike calls twilight out on her bs treatment of him and its not some instant make-up is already alright in my books.
Nefarious, man I always love playing as a villain
First impressions.
Oh, one of those-
That's new! Definitely giving this a look see later!
ok is this a game cross becuase this sounds fun
all i imagine is spike and his band of loyal creatures rushing a place as there ships speakers plays mackelmores cant hold us now
Nice start. I like how Spike's no longer a pushover.
I look forward to more of this. Book horse will get her dues.
More please, also include his rise to power.
Oh hey I played the game. The story is going to end with Spike “conquering” the world and Twilight having to become a “hero” right?
I seen the AMVs of Nefarious andI think you should used them as inspiration for upcoming chapters and the white hair girl reminds of EG Twilight a little
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That’s Becky and she’s tempest
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I know that but her hairstyle just looks exactly like Twilight in Equestria Girls and her singing voice sounds similar to twilight
The series has always used this treatment of Spike in the background for laughs and you don't notice because it happens when bigger stuff is happening. It's good to see Spike's point of view.
So he'll still get laid?