Minisode - Whole World
In response to Veo Skride, enjoy~
"Forty... two... f-forty t-thr..."
I feel my blood is at war with my muscles, it has been a perilous struggle over what side should be taken, and quite frankly, I have had enough of it. With a defeated whine I slumped to the dirt, coughing a few times at the lack of breath I had. That made today's record consisting of forty-three push-ups, sixty-five sit-ups, and a light sprint between Ponyville and the other side of the Everfree, and now I wanted to die.
Something felt broken. Each lungful burned. Sitting upright I steadied my breaths with a small exercise, listening closely to my heartbeat as each inhale drew it back down steadily. "This is why I stuck to being a shut-in..." A meager complaint from a guy-turned-Lucario in the world of magical talking ponies fighting Wyverns from Monster Hunter... that sounded alot better vocally if I'm honest
"Ah-hah, found you!" The ever-so-confident voice drew my head around to find that I had an audience consisting of the treasure hunter herself, hood down to show off her giddy smile and spring in her step. Her aura was all aglow today, well, more than it was when she left on her little scouting mission without me.
Yui blinked or winked, always hard to tell, her lips forming a thin line. "Hrm, you overtaxed yourself, didn't you?" I physically twitched and turned my head with guilt, scratching my cheek. Yui huffed. "Do you want me to knock the sense into you or have your body collapse instead?"
"Is neither an option?" I earned a wack of her wing across my ears. "Ack, I get the point, sorry!" Sitting back I raised my paws close to my chest spike. "I got literally sucker-punched by a giant monkey spitting lightning and my arms are still dead." A tremble at the thought of those golden fists striking me made my soul scream. "No more monkeys, please."
After a shake of her head that bright expression returned, her fang poking out while she clopped her hooves together. "Moving on! I've achieved the last ingredient I needed for a... helpful drink, hehehe," I don't like the sound of this, usually I'm the crash-test dummy. It was hard not to agree when she looked at me with the brightest expression possible. "Alright, check this out!"
"I'm checking." I hummed, watching her closely, then I held out a thumb of approval. "Sexy figure as always."
I saw her immediately stiffen with a blush as I hummed a laugh under my breath, "Ahem!" She pulled out with her wing a vile filled with a dark red substance; Chugging the elixir in a single swig Yui remained motionless, smacking her lips for a moment as her fur jittered. "Perfect, now I can now lift the whole world with just my hooves!" The two appendages rose to exemplify her point, but I could still sense her rapid heartbeat
My expression creased, trying to evaluate how that was possible? I mean, magic is stupidly overpowered sometimes, but no offense to Yui, strength wasn't her strongest physical attribute. Lifting a finger I went to raise a counter-argument at her blissful smile. "Um, love, that's not really-" !?!
Not a word later this petite bat-pony held me in her hooves with ease, sitting down to balance herself but somehow, she managed to lift me, hooves hugging my waist as I sat close to her chest. Despite my size compared to her own she had succeeded in lifting me with her eyes closed, displaying that loveable smile of hers with a hum.
Hold up, she said the 'world', but I'm... "Oh..." Dammit, she played me, and it was working! A faint blush dusted my cheeks as I crossed my arms at her use of what I could assume was one of my Demondrugs. Her lilac eyes shining bright up at me without breaking a sweat as for the pink tint on her own cheeks as stars seemed to dance around her, "Well played, Treasure Hunter."
"Love yoooou~!" This Mare...
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kek.
well made story.
10441545
I will admit your story was awesome and helped to give me the breakthrough I needed to write this. So keep up the good work!
10441570
Glad I could help. Honestly, even if it was inspired by my story, I'd still enjoy it. It's more than different enough from F&S and it's not like those similarities are uncommon. I'm just enjoying the story, so far.
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Last question...what ever happened to Mina, the one they spared?
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She's more than likely traversing the Equetrian waters as there was no other way for her to return to the Monster Hunter world without something akin to Zen's now shattered ruby.
Hehehe, nice! Thanks, once again, for this story!
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Happy to have entertained you, and thanks for reading
Great story I hope to see more and this the first story I was able catch right off the first chapter thx for writing this.
10458869
It was a pleasure writing, thanks for reading since the beginning!
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Ignore the other pokemon and add in our favourite bat.
10478153
Dammit, I really want to... you know what, I can work with this! Give me 'till the last Friday of October, I can cook something up!
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I just thought the image was really cute! I'm glad if I can add to your creative spark.
If I come across any more cute images of Lucario, I'll probably post them in a comment here, but don't feel any pressure to write just because I'm paying tribute to the story.
Lot's of love tho!
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It's kinda good you did post that image, I gave it some thought before and I'm working on a Halloween special just to wrap this story up, this little image will work as a perfect scene amongst the spooks
You know, we fully expected that potion to be a compatibility elixir!