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misskoifishpony


Hello Fluttercord Fans and shipper fans alike! My name is MissKoiFishPony, but you can call me Miss Koi or Missy:) I love My Little Pony, I love to write, I love Fluttercord.

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Trickle, trickle

Drip, drip

You better beware

Of The Bloody Mare


Inspired by xXMarkingXx's Bloody Marey

Cover Art by xXMarkingXx

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Imagine if her name was Mary.
Also good thing she's not human.

Initially, the poem format almost turned me off; more often than I want, I encounter incomprehensible poems that makes my head scratch. However, I did managed to follow what was going on (Or I hope I did), so that was rather nice.

I have nothing to say...

Who is The Bloody Mare🤔 Anyway

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It’s a mystery;) But whoever she is used to be, she still clings to her friend’s memory. And that’s how she became the monstrous mess you see;)

A very tantalizing story. Makes me ponder if Pinkie truly died at the end or if she's just trapped in the house forever as a part of the Bloody Mare and her "curse", turned into this replacement for her lost friend (however hair-splitting that may be).

The format is rather unusual but I have to give big props to anyone able to keep up such extensive rhyme schemes.

Only nitpick I have is to point out you've got a few "it's" where there should be "its".

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Makes me ponder if Pinkie truly died at the end or if she's just trapped in the house forever as a part of the Bloody Mare and her "curse", turned into this replacement for her lost friend (however hair-splitting that may be).

Oh good, I'm glad that the ending was kinda mysterious and kinda left to interpretation, I was afraid that it was too predictable or too spelt out or too written out:) So yeah, it's mysterious even at the end^^! Lol! But I'm so glad that this is story was very tantalizing;) Lol! That's one way to describe a MLP horror poem;) Also thank you for liking the story and giving it a chance, much appreciated <3

The format is rather unusual but I have to give big props to anyone able to keep up such extensive rhyme schemes.

Daww thank you^^ Much appreciated^^ I know it's a bit unusual to see a MLP story told through poem, especially a horror one no less. Especially here on Fimfiction where you have to have 1K or more in order to be published, so it's rare to see poems on here.

Only nitpick I have is to point out you've got a few "it's" where there should be "its".

Oh good to know, thanks for letting me know:) I'll fix those right away:)

It's nice to see more spooky poems like this on the site!

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Oh wow, thank you for, not only reading and reviewing my story, but for also putting this into your personal favorites:D

So its basically rainbows fault that her friend pinkie is trapped in that house with autumn, rainbow should be the one trapped in there not here, rainbow should go and help her instead of just leaving her. Also lesson learned trust no one especally your friends

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