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Shadowmane PX-41


Just your average british lad. I write things for a living. It’s the strangest living you’ll ever find, second only to my inability to take myself off of the grid.

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The Rainbooms find themselves on a field trip for some extra credit as their graduation day draws ever closer. With a long drive ahead of them, the girls all set off for a little town in the woods called Pitchfork Pines.

But Pichfork Pines is no ordinary town. And the children they are about to see are no ordinary kids...

Equestria Girls x Super Monsters crossover. Enjoy!

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Well, certainly improved my Halloween at any rate. Not the world's biggest Super Monsters fan, but it was cute enough and the characters really played off each other very well.

But seriously, you do you and don't let anyone give you any crap about this story. Like, seriously, this was so you it almost hurts. Also, writing this story for ages? That's a bit of an understatement.

(Also, was it wrong to listen to Thriller and PARTY while reading this?)

Seriously, great work. You may make a fan out of me yet. Also, did you write the Rainbooms song yourself?



Darkness falls across the land, the midnight hour is close at hand.

Creatures crawl in search of blood to terrorize your neighborhood.

And who shallever be found without the soul for getting down...

Shall stand and face the hounds of Hell and rot inside a corpses shell...

Oh, and Happy Halloween.

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Seriously, great work. You may make a fan out of me yet.

Hooked, piqued, interested. And there’s more to see and do.

That’s why I’ll Make a Fan Out Of You!

Also, did you write the Rainbooms song yourself?

Yes. I did. I made all of the Rainbooms’ lyrics, but when it came to when the Super Monsters took over, it’s mostly taken from the credits of the show from Season 2 onwards, since it’s like an extended version of the theme song. (Not counting Vida’s role in the roll call. That I made from the ground up. And it makes the song feel complete in my eyes, because there’s now 8 bars instead of 7.)

Oh, and Happy Halloween.

Thanks, bud. Happy Halloween to you too.

A VERY appropriate story for Halloween. Admittedly, this is the first I have EVER heard of the Super-Monsters franchise, but I DO find this a rather light-hearted crossover with two sets of characters who play off each other quite well (which is EXACTLY what a truly GOOD crossover SHOULD do).

Anyway, really good job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I especially liked the Rainbooms finding out more about the Super-Monsters' abilities and vice-versa (as well as the Rainbooms realizing that not ALL magic in the world has to be Equestrian).

Anyway, you have obviously worked REALLY hard on this crossover for quite some time as you have said and the hard work definitely shows. :-D

Happy Halloween to you and your family and friends.

Wow. This was a long one... and it was worth the read. I did not know anything about Super Monster and the intro for the monsters was helpful. Songs in stories I never really read cuz I just don't. But this one I did and it was awesome. Good work Shadow.

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Thanks for that, Knives. Always happy to get feedback on my fics.

"And... you know, it's actually kind of funny. Now that I think about it, you sound exactly like me."
"Oh! Do I?" Katya asked, then covered her mouth when she realised it as well. Her voice was identical to that of Fluttershy's voice. "So I do... That's strange, but it's kinda funny too."

Now that I think about it, they do sound the same

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They’re both the same voice actress. Andrea Libman. Both pulling off the Fluttershy voice.

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I never pay attention to credits :twilightblush:

Well, I'm impressed that I read this in one day. I took a few breaks, but still. I liked this story.:twilightsmile: Took me a few hours to read it all, but it as worth it.

I've never heard of Super Monsters before now, but this was so cute and I kinda want to check it out now.

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