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TheMajorTechie


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This story is a sequel to Pony-Me™


This story has been rewritten. Check it out here!

Elise Fairchild was your average, run-of-the-mill high school girl. She had friends, she had interests, and more often than not, she'd found herself wondering about the future. One day, she's presented with the opportunity of a lifetime.

It's a good thing she didn't have anything better to do.


Being a direct sequel, it is highly recommended that you read the original first.

Just like the original, this story is based on a chapter from What If. :twilightsmile:


Preread by Thunderous, JetXPegasusWWN, and Babroniedad.

Formerly preread by Rezyl.

Cover art by myself, using Tr1nks1e's drawing of Luster Dawn's cutie mark.

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 26 )

I am the forest, I am one with the trees!
From the roots of Yggdrasil do I emerge, bravely festering festerly ferg.
And may history repeat and say your goodbyes for as you say yours I say mine. Goodbye! Goodbye!
And as you say goodbye may we also say goodbye to the rest of the world Goodbye! Goodbye!

This place is so slow now i'm going strange.
Can you find the secret message in my brain?
kulymangicerreo***
edit: Im sorry.

Comment posted by hector dabullio deleted Dec 17th, 2019

9991578
It's not spam. Just... unexpected.

Comment posted by hector dabullio deleted Dec 17th, 2019
Comment posted by hector dabullio deleted Dec 17th, 2019

9991892
I'm sorry, but I will have to block you.

This is the final chapter of the old story. From here on out there will be no new chapters. I plan to publish the rewritten chapters in an entirely new story. In the meantime, happy reads!

So you're rewriting the original story with Twilight, then continuing this, or rewriting both into a single story?

10006078
I plan to publish a new story under a new title as a new sequel. This story will stay up just as an archive.

The new story is still going to focus on the same characters as this one. The most that I've been rewriting is the plot and the lore.:twilightsmile:

“…O-oh. That… that’s not good, is it?”

Oh, no, it's perfectly fine. The fire's normal, it'll just kill a few hundred people, but other than that, it's fine.

Hey! It says completed, but it's cancelled! :raritydespair:

10159941
It was rewritten, but the rewrite will be entering an indefinite hiatus after chapter 9.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/459486/into-equestria

You already saw the blogpost about it.

10159947
I kinda just looked at the Pony-Me series possibly being cancelled thing 'cause I had no clue what it was at the time--I thought that the Pony-Me(TM) series was separate from it--but still, you should label it cancelled and say something like "NOTE BEFORE READING: This story has been cancelled and is being rewritten and completed here." When you said this story was completed and being rewritten, I figured it was, you know, completed, and you were writing an improved version now.

10159970
Sorry for being so confusing.

"Legacy edition" in the title, alongside the large-font text in the description, both point to "Into Equestria" as being the rewrite of this story. I really don't want to continue anymore with either incarnation of Into Equestria anymore, though. I'm done with this story universe. It was enjoyable back when it was only Pony-Me, but now... now it's just a mess.

I'll mark this story as canceled instead and change Into Equestria to hiatus. The latter was already planned to enter a hiatus anyway.

10159997
It's okay, I'm just glad it's fixed so it doesn't trip future readers. :pinkiesmile:

10160004
Either way, save for an incomplete chapter I'm pushing out in Into Equestria, neither of these stories are likely going to be continued anytime soon.

10160006
Man, and I just found this awesome series. :applecry:

10160010
I know. :ajsleepy:

The main problem I've had since starting this story, and later on shelving it for Into Equestria, was that it was always too rushed, alongside the fact that I no longer had anything to draw off of for the story. The final epilogue of Pony-Me really did explain it all; the purpose of the story as a whole was finished, and I didn't want to drag things on for any longer because I knew that the story had nowhere else to go.

But at some point or another, I started a sequel anyway because people wanted one.

That is now clearly a mistake. I should've left the story alone for some time so that I could naturally come up with something instead of forcing myself to write a sequel based on nothing.

10160015
Yes, that's true. I read chapter 4 and I just saw the hacker start doing his thing again with the fire and I want to know what happens next! At least there are 5 more chapters left, soon to be 6! :pinkiehappy:

10160015
Done reading! Also, if Spike is Lisa's real brother, what about Shining Armor?

10160133
I don't think I mentioned him even once in the series.

10160139
I know, that's why I'm asking about him. I'm curious about him. Is he an AI, too?

Comment posted by RandomGuy101 deleted April 2nd
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