If I cold begin to be half of what you think of me I could do about anything I could even learn how to love like you.
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Oh hey, a story glorifying Worst Pone!
9899524
This isn't about Spoiled Rich
Hmm. Meh. I might read it or not, but hey there are other stories I can read if I find this not suitable for me.
I'll just wait until you write some good filly-action.
Good start BTW.
9899551
There most definitely WILL be filly action in this.
Great work can’t wait for the next update
Thick
9899633
I have no idea why you said that, but it made me laugh so Thumbs up!
Oh this is going to be sweet! My Goddess being depicted as one in a story and it looks like she's gonna get some action from a cute lavender unicorn! I'll be keeping an eye on this one!
9899758
Your Goddess is pleased with your loyalty. She will make a deciple out of you yet. A fair warning though, this story is going to be DARK. like, Whitekitten levels.
9899758
There's some asshat going around disliking everything and it's kind of funny
9899771
It is probably some butthurt individual who hates Starlight and can't stand to see a story depicting Starlight as the Queen that she is....oh and I love your avatar, the best anthro Celestia one of them all in my opinion.
Honestly... If we don't get Twi getting railed by Starlight with a temporary horse dick ima be disappointed
Lmao
They are ponies....they don't eat steak.
9901414
you didnt read the author's notes, did you?
9901123
"Temporary "
Ha!
Hell YES!
That's all I got to say, nice chapter.
9901558
Why thank you!
Euh!? That was... rather quick. From willing servitude, to accepting being called a slave in under 30 seconds. I'm quite shocked by your version of Equestria. O_o'. Nonetheless, it is a story worth reading.
9901695
Here's the in-universe explanation:
She's THAT grateful to the first pony who showed her kindness in years.
From the RP sense:
We had some really good stuff planned that we wanted to get to that required the fast turnaround.
This is gonna get hot really quick :D
9903416
Oh Hell yeah.
Great job can’t wait for the next chapter
I'm reading your author's notes and that is right up my alley! Ponies are omnivores in my ponyverse too and cannibalism does happen.
Twilight and Starlight in a sexual relationship, I like it!
Starlight's going to regret this, isn't she?
9904268
nope
9904275
Well good, I'd hate to see her generosity with Twilight causing everything she had built to crash and burn.
9904277
That will never happen. This whole fic is "Starlight is OP as fuck"
9904280
Sweet, OP Starlight is the best Starlight
9904287
That is a fact
...Exactly how dark are we talking here?
Generally I do not like Starlight centered fanfiction....
...This has become the exception, please continue.
9904335
Well... the last two chapters ended with Twilight eagerly becoming a slave, then murdering a pony and saying it wouldn't matter if Starlight killed anyone in front of her, and then this chapter is only two hours later with Twilight wishing to kill her father (understandable) and then going to be f#@%ed senseless by Starlight... So I'm willing to bet pretty dark.
9904335
Let me put it this way:
Not even fillies and colts are safe.
Love that little addition of what Starlight was thinking during that moment.
So... how long before Rarity and AJ are bowing down to Starlight?
9906004
Not long at all
1.
Another nice touch with the added thought.
2.
Might want to edit that line
9904245
CANNIBALS! CAAANIBALS!
OH NO! I JUST STARTED READING FUCK! I THOUGHT IT WAS COMPLETED. I'm an idiot. It's oki. Can't wait for the next one!
9906589
I am literally working on the next one right now.
9906591
Omg! You got this!
9906589
This won't be completed for a long LONG while.
This was hilarious, the way you had Starlight kill them and had Twilight cheering her on.
9911867
Sadly, it already got me another dislike. sigh Fuck people amirite?
9911872
I know how you feel there. I would think that Flim and Flam getting killed in a rather humiliating way would get you upvotes.
9911876
I'm going to have to wait for a couple hours until I can say how many upvotes or downvotes I get. So far I got one of each.
9911883
Well at least you got one upvote!