Never had seen the show My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic, she has no clue what this talking creature named Silver Spoon is or where she came from.
When I thought I saved a cat from getting ran over, it turned out to be a...talking pony? My parents told me to be perpared for the big apple but...A talking baby pony?!
Inspired by My Little Dashie by Robcakeran53. No matter what I write, it will never be as good as the beautiful master piece written by Mr. Robcakeran53. So consider this story a tribute to the fanfic, My Little Dashie.
Chapters (9)
This story is just adorable dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_OMG_LOVE.png
Loved every bit of it, keep up the good work. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png
Interesting.
I'll see more.
Awesome.
I love this story so far!
I almost like this one better than Dashie, simply because it uses Silver Spoon.
Good job.
Have to give somewhat of a critique here, she's short on money and she lives in a somewhat small apartment yeah?
I'd say for the apartment to have a fireplace it'd be very expensive.
Just a note, I know a fireplace fits in nicely in the story.
This made me D'aaaaawww a multiple number of times
The story could've been fitted into one oneshot though, the chapters were kinda short. No offence, though
Well done.
I like where this is headed, just started reading.......
Edit: this is good, i like it
AAAAAND enter a shitstorm
And enter the adorableness, and yes i feel the need to coment on this story because its not being put into the light like it should
and enter another shitstorm
Honestly, this is adorable as hell, but the bills are worrying me
Dat ending! but seriously, this was great! Simply loved it!
Wonderful, quaint, no emotional piledrivers per se, undoubtedly adorable. Like and a Fav for you! Well done!
The writing is rough, but the idea is solid.
I have to say I rather enjoyed it... Though I kept expecting a Puella Magi reference due to the title of the last chapter.
You've got a thumbs up. Keep writing :)
After reading chapter 5:
Sheesh, the situation is a constant leap from the frying pan into another frying pan.
I'll keep reading.
Well, it wasn't half bad.
Props to you. (+1 Like)
What's this? Only 56 likes? We should fix that.
In all seriousness, this is honestly one of the best Dashie-inspired fics I've ever read. Didn't cry like I did after reading Dashie, but I felt something. And it felt wonderful. If and when the time comes for me to write my own, this (as well as the original by ROBCakeran53) is the standard I'll be holding myself to, and I can only hope like hell I meet that standard.
Well done. VERY well done.
After reading this chapter: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooo................................. Wait a minute,
...... MLP is populer right? 
maybe just maybe her brothers are bronys? Just putting that out there. 
after reading this chapter: The park?
(lol 5 reactions from 5 ponies, all describing my reaction.)
Announcer: Ponies React: BILLS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (a.k.a this chapter)
Applebloom:oh no
Fluttershy:
Pinkie pie:
Rarity:
Celestia:
Bills for all!
Really Trollestria, Really.
eeyup
you two are hilarious!
Applejack:
Celestia: Don't you dare call me that again AJ. You may be the Element of Honesty but I can still send you to the moon.
Big Mac:
RD:
Announcer: I couldn't agree with you more Rainbow. Well, that's all the time we have for tonight. Goodnight everypony!
Announcer: Ponies react: Elements: This story
Thisstorywasawesome! Canyouakemorelikethisone?
Good work!
That's what you would think Twi, being an egghead and all.
I am not an egghead! I appreciate good literature.
*laugh*
This story was amazing! Um.. are you recording?
PINKIE:
Rarity: Simply marvelous!
Twi:
RD:
Twi:
RD: Egghead. * snicker*
AJ:
Fluttershy:
Announcer: Yea...
Fluttershy: um........ *runs off camera.*
Announcer: well that's all the time for tonight. Goodnight everypony!
Sorry, but I have downvoted. This story tries too hard to be My Little Dashie but fails at key points. Instead of a loveable little filly, we get everyone's second least favourite, which greatly affects the reader's view of the story. Instead of being cute, she remains annoying with negligible character development. Instead of a valid conflict built up due to perceived betrayal, all we get is a stupid running away. Instead of the legitimate emotional impact of fifteen years of family relation, we get five minutes of giggling and poking. Instead of a heartwrenching goodbye, we get something more akin to "good riddance".
This story would have worked much better if Silver Spoon had more detailed character development and really got better as a person, and her relation to the girl got more detailed and shaded over the years of cohabitation.
Edit: fixed typo
>>Frigo You do make some good points but however, this story wasn't intended to try and be too much like My Little Dashie. It was simply a tribute to the idea of the story. A tribute. However I respect your opinion and overall thought.
Seems legit..
I...ummm....LOVE IT!
I am intrigued good sir or Madame.
I think I JUST found the next Silver Spoon fic I want to read
Oh I cant wait till the cat, dog, pony thing starts talking to her LOL I wonder if Silver will be grateful or resentful
1917822 Are you kidding ME?
that's all the MORE reason she needs to keep Silver out of sight. Unless they're a cool Silver Spoon fan like me
they would be all up in her face like "why do you pick on the CMC? what the buck did they ever do to you? what makes you think you're so damn special? Why do you hang out with that bitch Tiara? What the buck does you OH SO SPECIAL mark even mean anyway!?" and that's if their NICE about it.
They could just as easily tell her she should kill her self or go to pony hell.. bronies can be mean sons ah bitches and the last thing Silver Spoon needs is an inquisition of haters!
(In Agent K's voice) A Brony is smart.. BronIES are dumb, panicky, dangerous animals and you know it."
Well.. that could have gotten real ugly real quick. Even if they didn't pester her about her bullying they would overwhelm her with questions about her world.
and I dare say there might be several bronies not content to flame and rage about her on line. Now the other bronies would probably defend her and their would be blood bath between the two factions.
makes me wonder though are there any bronies that would physically harm DT and Silver Spoon if they saw her in real life?
So this is why everyone said My Little Dashie was so sad?
I will admit I almost cried. But I knew how this story had to end, so I was prepared.
and it isn't a sad ending, it's a happy one. Silver Spoon will be a better pony for meeting Jayme and Jayme's life has been brightened by her fond memories of Silver.
and whose to say Silver can not go back for a visit? If a beginner like Sweetie can send her to another world how hard would it be for Twilight? or she could pay Trixie if she can do it.
Great story. touching and well written.
and LOL in all her research she never once came across info on
I just realized, if I never saw the show, I would probably never recognize a filly as a pony.
Well... Horseplot. Now I have to do a memory spell AGAIN!!!
Alrighty then, SS probably WON'T run away.... Probably...
I find this a good time to say that more people need to think of things besides SS confessing her goodness to the CMC. Such as this! Where else have you seen a silver spoon story (try saying that 5 times fast) that isn't her being sorry for what she's doing to the CMC, or something of a VERY similar fashion. I mean really people, how unoriginal can you get?!
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I'm done now. Next chapter.
I am intrigued...also I don't like the MC's name. Just putting that out there.
3480681 probably, there are ALWAYS phycos in every group.
What I'm curious about is which side would have more people? I feel most of the SS hate group would be show loyalists, while the SS love group would be people who read fanfics, like this one, that potray SS as a nice person on the inside. Unless they put a new episode into the show that has SS in a good light (unlikely)
1. You need to learn to expand your chapters, they feel... Stated....
2. I am going to make a prediction: jayme will earn money by selling pictures she draws of SS!
3. I think she needs a bit of help getting SS home. Hang on... (Beep) (beep) (beep) (beep) (beep) hello, Celestia? Yeah, we got another one... New York this time... Understood, I'll get the portal ready... Yes, this IS happening quite a bit, isn't it? Gotta go, see ya soon! (Click) alrighty then, she should appear in... A few chapters or so. You're welcome.
Wow... That was quick... Btw, about when did this take place author? Please use episodes as references.
3479734 which would be...?
A-hem... I feel like this is an amazing story, if you expand upon it more. Say a sequel where Jayme's crack in her wall absorbed a bit of the magic from Tia's spell and became a portal? And, perhaps, Jayme falls through into the Canterlot throne room? And to protect her, Celestia turns her into a pony, and sends her to silver spoon!
5481700 Oh man that was a long time ago. I wrote that before i read this fic.
I was referring to this fic when I said "this is my next read"
5481562 Honestly i think there are allot more Silver lovers then we give her credit for. But the haters would most likely outnumber them like 3 to 1 and thats a very optimistic prediction.
5482731 yes, but still, numbers don't always matter. Take for instance in "Eragon" when Roran killed almost 500 soldiers singlehandedly