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The leaders at the Equestria Games seemed to imply there were several other griffon nations on their planet.

I always find likes and dislikes useless, since people will just dislike a story out of ignorance, just because they don't like the kind of story, without even reading it.
I can say that, even if I'm not a fan of gore and vore, I enjoyed reading this story because is well written, good job

We need more stories like this

Not my type of thing under normal circumstances, but the idea, plus the cover art, had me curious, and I read through it. It's not bad, well written, with good descriptions of the various scenes, and a lot of good moments. You do this well.

And not just the men, but the women and the children too! They are like animals! So I slaughtered them like animals! I HATE THEM!

Basically Celestia in a nutshell in this

Who made the cover art?

Princess Celestia hung her head low as she gently strolled towards the gryphon village, not even breaking a blade of grass beneath her stride. She knew what she had to do and why she had to do it, the safety of Equestria had made her needs clear, but that didn't mean she had to like it. These innocents, these gryphons... they didn't deserve this. They didn't. Her head was hung low, while her body sagged slightly.

Well, guess what numbnuts, you don't have to wipe them out. It's a godamn village, not a military base. Sorry but you're just a fucking genocidal sack of shit.

As soon as Princess Celestia realized that there were some alive, she shuddered and choked out a sob, feeling like she was going to puke there and then. This was supposed to be quick, clean, painless, not leave them squirming on the underside of her hoof. For a brief moment, she thought about letting them go, nursing them to health ... but that wasn't an option. She knew it.

Well, you can always turn right the fuck back and not commit genocide. I'm sorry but there is never and will never be an excuse for genocide.

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No, we really don't. It tries to be a decent story but it fails. The main characters are genocidal assholes and/or fucking retards. And really, there isn't much else to this story other than genocidal porn.