These stories range from tragic to suspense, seasoned with a little bit of horror and some times a sprinkle of acid humor.
First Chapter: Fluttershy, a matter of adoration.
Second Chapter: Rarity, a matter of perfection.
Third Chapter: Applejack, a matter of business.
Fourth Chapter: Twilight Sparkle, a matter of knowledge.
Fifth Chapter: Rainbow Dash, a matter of speed.
Sixth Chapter: Pinkie Pie, a matter of chaos.
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Nice 4.5
But this makes me re-think my opions about Fluutershy 
I am really looking foward to read more of this story. Also, I'm your first follower
I wonder whats going to happen with Rarity? 
I love short stories!
Definitely tracked!
Hmmm. This was very nice indeed.
But I spotted a flaw: Wasn't Rarity supposed to become a diamond herself after she repeated the words that the old stallion urged her to?
And: What a manipulative bitch.
Nice in a twisted way
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Fluttershy, what the hay?!
I'll admit this, I was worrried for a second when I read your chapter 3 only, because the concept seemed similar to my chapter 3, but damn dude dynamite? Bucking awesome
Woah these stories just keep getting creepier and creepier I LOVE IT!
Hehehe.
You MUST make Pinkamena's story the best of them all!
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Going along with the delusions of the old pony, she followed each of his instructions carefully and when they both finished the preparations, which consisted on her reading a rhyme the old pony repeated, the diamond started glowing and then something happened that changed Rarity’s life forever.
I believe that paragraph means he gave her the poem by some other means (i.e. Writing it down) then had her perform the ritual on him to make sure it worked. It seems that her reading each line first is an integral part of the ritual.
Nice!
Every pony does some skulduggery some times!
I don't know about the rest of you, but the cover image for this story makes me LOL on sight.
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I liked Rarity's episde the most so far. I have a theory that Rarity didn't turn into a diamond because she was reading the rhyme and the old pony repeated it. She probably closed her eyes when the old pony was transformed.
And I agree, Rarity, manipulative much in this episode? And am I the only one who thinks that rhyme is scary somehow?
Applejack going all mafia style reminds me of the godfather movies for some reason. But that pony hitting on her got what he deserved!
OOOOoooo..... This new chapter forces me to see Twilight in a different light!
Pinkie seems to be alright.... for now
Awww poor princesses
. Twilight the alicorn? That DOES have a nice ring to it 
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Wow... Rainbow Dash is the only one so far to have a conscience
Don't end it now! Please, use background characters
We knew she was evil.
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Less of a victim, more of risk taker.
Her eyes where opened to what she could do, ruling all was the most logical solution.
Oh, poooooor Dashie! U made Fluttershy, Rarity, Applejack and Twilight evil,
I dunno what u gonna do with Pinkie but it better be awesome!!!!!
And U KILLED DASHIE!!!!
Awww Rainbow
Can't wait to see what ghastly thing Pinkie is going to do 
YOU LIED TO MY SISTER FLUTTERBITCH!
Fuck you, fluttershy. I never liked you anyway.
Oh my god
You... killed... Dashie... 
There was a moment when I thought all would be fine at the end!
, not me 'cause I suck at drawing but someone should do it.
I think the whole story is worth reading only because of chapters four and five alone, Rarity's episode is still my favorite but I have to admit these two chapters are amazing.
my... my confirmation pony picture thingy is Rainbow Dash?
But I can forgive you because this is so good. I was at the edge of my seat when I read this. And you tricked me!
I can say one thing. The Steed Reaper is the most fucking awesome original character ever!
Someone needs to seriously fanart this chapter with Rainbow seeing the Steed Reaper for the first time
This and the previous chapter are a two punch combo of awesome.
Wow. Hey, you're pretty good at this. I feel that Pinkie will be the hardest as you have to try and make a story that's not too cupcakes-esque (We've seen that too many times, I think).
This is excellent. You managed to write a story showing corruption in the carefree, happy Pinkie Pie without having to resort to using crazy-depressed Pinkie Pie and also without a single reference to that, lets face it, overused 'cupcakes' stereotype. It was fresh and new and very well written. Fantastic, I'm only sorry there will be no more chapters!
Wow... you said that I wouldn't like this chapter.
You're right; I didn't liked it.
I loved it!
What I expected:
What I got:
My reaction:
Hells yeah, I frickin loved everyone of these. I guess this means I'm following you after favoriting this.
"Come to my side Pinkie." I couldn't help but think of this chapter as a Star Wars chapter after that very line
Pretty good story. I liked its creepyness
You shoud make more
Nice way to close it up!
I love how you write Pinkie Pie!
I thought you would try to one-up Cucpakes by having her eat all her friends but, what you did here is even better. You wrote Pinkie as she is. I mean, Pinkie does feel like Pinkie and that's amazing!
And let's face it, you know that she would totally side with Discord if she had the right motivations.
Great final chapter!
My reaction to this collection of one shots:
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This chapter made the DiscoPie shipper in me incredibly happy, it fits my headcanon.
Well... my honest opinion is that these first two stories fail to grab, because they're not really about Fluttershy or Rarity. They're about two ponies who are so different from Fluttershy and Rarity that the stories aren't in any way an exploration of those characters. That makes them just short narratives about nasty ponies. That's not story.
If the stories showed a dark side of the existing characters, that would be interesting. Or if they developed new characters that had a dark side and a light side, that could be interesting too.
Oh dear god...
That's bucking scary.
That wasn't evil at all!
This chapter needs a full story...
...Holy Hell *starts laughing* Yep I'm gonna like these stories.
The scary part is that I can actually see this happening.
AND SCREW YOU TWI FOR DESTROYING DISCORD!!!!
YAY! DISCORD PINKIE TEAM! YAY!