Cars are still parked outside. If the rapture had happened, why was it unrecognizable? Why was the sky blue? Why did no one tell me? Do these things not announce themselves?
On the edge of Sweet Apple Acres lies a grave, marked with a wooden cross. Nopony knows who it belongs to. And for Daring Do, that’s a problem. One that she intends to solve. But how can you make the world remember someone that time forgot?
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This was a very emotional read. Great job. Though one of your spacers wasn't formatted correctly and you can see the [br]. Starts after Breaburn vanishes. Solid 9/10 there.
9888193
Fixed, thank you!
Well... I'm mad now. And sad. So... thanks?
You get a favorite, regardless.
9888475
Lol, no problem (I guess?)
Beautiful
..
9888617
Thank you!
I cried.
I've never really been open to seeing Daring as vulnerable, and I thought I never would.
But this story definitely showed me a side to Daring that really fits her well.
And it's written beautifully - such a great story.
Good work, really.
9891469
thank you!
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9895065
Thanks!
That was very well written, the story was consistent throughout the reading. Had a good start, background explanation, and ending.
It had some aspects I tried using in my story Plastic Smiles you should check it out.
9983919
Thank you!
Dang it, Red. This was good. Talk about a way to go.
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Thanks Bill ^^