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Stallion of Steel


It's never as bad as it seems. In this world there is right and there is wrong, and that distinction is not difficult to make. You're much stronger than you think you are. Trust me.

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This story is a sequel/spinoff to https://www.fimfiction.net/story/282716/comet-the-colt-of-steel


Many years have passed since a spaceship landed at Sweet Apple Acres. Comet now leads a team of heroes known as the Justice Stable of Equestria and is seen by other heroes as somepony to aspire to. Except for his 'older cousin' Tara-Zar-El who just sees him as a big blue dork who goes around spouting nonsense about friendship.

An epilogue story set around the time of The Last Problem.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 3 )

Not a bad look to the future. I do have one minor complaint that you didn’t give the Lois analog the same letter as the first letter of her first and last name. I wonder who else is in the group and who else became a superhero?

Excellent job on this first chapter of this sequel story. The action, exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places. I especially liked how Comet adopted the "Clyde Kentucky" identity as an adult as well as the added details of the things that have happened in the more than two decades since Comet got his start as a colt. Things like the appearance of the Batman analogue Midnight (great little jab to "the Mysterious Mare-Do-Well" deal by the way), the stuff like Applejack and Rainbow being Mareley's adoptive parents, the stuff concerning - the Squad and more still. And, at least Comet finally got over that crush on Twilight.

Anyway, very definitely looking forward to more of this.

Shouldn't you link to and say in the synopsis that this story is a sequel/side-story to Comet The Colt of Steel?

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