Trust Once Lost

by Greenhorne

Musical Interlude II

To explain your relocation
There's a simple explanation:
You're a toymaker's creation
Trapped inside a children's show!

And whichever way you wander
Ponyville is over yonder
This new chance you musn't squander
As we sing this silly song

When I wasn't yet a filly, I didn't know it would be so tricky
So I told a man you can do your worst,
If you can make me a mare then you'd be the first
I got myself in-to this mess, hope they-don't make me wear a dress.
Now my memories are absurd and I think they all misheard,
But I still know the words to this song.

When you're throat is feeling strangled
And your foreleg has been mangled
Don't you listen to the jangle
Of the bell that tolls for thee

Cause these chords are hypnotizing
And this whole world's harmonizing
So now Green please stop your crying
And Just sing along with me!

Author's Note:

I'm still trying to write the next chapter

Comments

[German Kaiserreich]

Cute

[Boopy Doopy]

Music

[Jinzou]

Art, per usual.

[Truthseeker]

Noooooo! Not just music! We need a chapter, please!

[Greenhorne]

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Sung to the tune of this song.

[Tigron]

The best stories always take a long time to write. I very much appreciate your writing. :3

[Level Dasher]

Very nice! Been a while since I've listened to that song.

[Black--Soul]

Time to bring out the big guns!

[Carbon]

155 words
*sigh*

[Enclave2277]

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[Greenhorne]

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[SilentStroll]

I appreciate that you’re still working. Keep it up!

[Ponifex]

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>when no new chapter for your favourite fic
why live?

[Red Bear]

Even a short update like this gives me hope that there will be more chapters in the future.

I wonder if we'll see Green hiding in a cardboard box at some point. That would be cute.

[Greenhorne]

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[Viper Pit]

The question mark on anonfilly looks like a birth mark and the dot is her eye

[Ciber]

Trying is good. Failing brings dishonor unto your house.

[Thatdudethere789]

Wasn't even an actual chapter, and your story was STILL featured. Noice. That's awesome.

[FanOfMostEverything]

I appreciate the effort and the update. Looking forward to the next installment.

[Greenie MaKuz]

I recently changed my name to Green and this fic always takes me off guard 😅

[Plonys are Great]

This makes me happy.

[Munro]

daaw :D

[silvadel]

I'd be happy to adopt FiW Pinkie Pie.

[harts fire]

aw such a sett pinkie pie slice of life chapter.

take the time you need some chapters are just hard or your muse jumps ship on you.

[Eris Dis Harmonia]

I just started singing this after reading it... in the middle of a grocery store.

Thank you for the opportunity to start this year with harmless chaos.

[Bonster]

Just finished binging through this; it's really really good! One of the best takes on this sort of story that I've seen in a hot minute. Keep up the good shit!

[ChronoMitsurugi]

Ah, a new summary for this fic maybe?
Someone who has singing talent (so not me) should cover this.

[Reganadex]

This story is a good example of why authors should make a outline of their entire story from start to finish before they start filling in the chapters. Otherwise they they’re making stuff up on the fly, taking 2 months to write 1k words, and presumably fighting against writer’s block.

[Vaguely Demented]

The only question is if Pinkie ever actually sings this to Green.

[Silent Wing]

Take all the time you need. I just know it, whatever comes out at the end can only be awesome.

[Lady Lightning Strike]

Cause these chords are hypnotizing And this whole world's harmonizing So now Green please stop your crying And Just sing along with me!

Someone has been listening to Gypsy Bard Pinkie pie a lot!

[Shanenator]

At yer own pace there, friendo. I have confidence the next bit will be worth waiting for.

[Teraunce]

Well nice summary.

[tsaukpaetra]

😘 excellent!
Now to get someone to render it!

[Bitty45]

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This is generally good advice, but keep in mind that the author is also doing actually important things. (I forget what their job was but I’m pretty sure it was nurse)

[DF]

I don't like songs in stories. I find them distracting and almost all of the time they are such a departure from the events being described that it's jarring.

But this? I love this.

But I might be biased since Friendship is Witchcraft is amazing. And that is indisputable fact.

[JayBlade752]

buck you thats cheezy 😅😂🙄

[tkepner]

And now that you've written the next,
you can erase the Author's Note text
The extra time you needed,
allowed the chapter to be completed.

[Witchery]

Okay, this is absolutely phenominal.

[N4rwh41]

This brings tears to my eyes. The feels!

[Black--Soul]

So sort yet beautiful. 👍

[Finn the Kirin]

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Oh, that was a good one!

[darklight731]

Should I be ashamed or proud that I knew exactly how to sing this song?

[Pensive]

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Great! Feel proud! Now sing this one and feel horrible!

Personally my favorite Gypsy Bard remix would be this

[Ziper Ace]

Honestly Green can literally just tell Pony's that she's Gay or Transgender and another option is TomCult.

[DrCygnus]

Fantastic

[Evil Paladin]

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*takes a sip from the Gypsy Bard remix mug*
Mmmm!
That's a good remix right there.
The one that you said was your favorite.