Trust Once Lost

by Greenhorne

Supplemental: Patient Notes 3

Top Five Care Tips!
Personalized Confused Patient Management Strategy Documentation
Form #73-219A

Please help the patient to fill in the spaces below. If the patient is unable or non-compliant, fill in the answers for them as best as you are able. Each point should be in the form of an 'I' statement.

Hi, my name is _{Patient Name}, but I prefer to be called Green.

1. I have short term memory loss so I may forget where I am and what I’m doing, please reorient and give reassurance
2. I startle easily so be sure to introduce yourself and tell me what you’re doing before you touch me
3. I like to talk about nursing, sometimes I like to pretend I’m a nurse too!
4. I won’t tell you if I’m in pain so look for non-verbal signs of distress
5. I can mobilise independently but I require supervision and assistance with all ADLs

Comments

[Captawesome]

you tease

[zxzxzxzxzx24]

So did green write this herself in a moment of dramatic self awareness or...?

[Greenhorne]

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Nah, Redheart wrote this yesterday when Green was still delirious.

[tsaukpaetra]

"I'm patient, but you can call me Name!" 😉

[Midknight Defender]

Hhhrrm.

The doctor has prescribed more horse words. Please take this scrip over to the pharmacy and get Anon3mous1 to fill it before you leave the building!

[Top_Kat]

I like the patient notes sections. It adds to the feel of the story. I am looking forward to reading what happens next and seeing how Green deals with her magic pathways opening up.

[Algedor]

Aaaw, this is sweet. Green would hate it.
But seriously, this is cute, thanks.

[Moonlight_Mist]

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Calling it now. The local pharmacologist is actually named 'Patient Name'.

[Chucklespie]

You know what the funniest part is? That it rythmes, something this sad has no right to be this clever and hilarious.

[Zilverfoss]

ADL?

[Greenhorne]

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Activities of Daily Living.

[Rawislon03]

I do truly hope this is plays into the next chapter. Probably something for Green to complain about.

[Shanenator]

Tease!!

...That's ok. You can have your fun. I can wait.

[Munro]

i can see green to be at least a little annoyed at filling something like that out xD

[FanOfMostEverything]

I would not be at all surprised if Green officially ends up as "Patient Name" in Equestria's bureaucracy.

[Viper Pit]

Short but informative

[Bitty45]

I was wondering why this wasn’t getting updates, but then I realized you have actually important work to do saving lives. Keep up the good work!

[lebowski42]

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Aperently Redheart wrote that in the blank space , and there has got to be weirder pony names out there. So I wouldn't be surprised

[VilkaTheWolf]

Really like all these little insights into medical notes and verbiage.

[Boopy Doopy]

This is cute

[KittyrinnAiko]

I vote for Oliver Christapher Davis as Green's real name.

[Level Dasher]

"'Pretend?!'"

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I see what you did there.

[Black--Soul]

Im so confused right about now... Also dissapointed How could you Typical Tease

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Priceless indeed
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Huh... Neat...
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More silly than cute
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I need that one explained to me

[Vaguely Demented]

I can only imagine the frustration Green would feel if she ever got hooves on this.

[Black--Soul]

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Could be mutch worse.. Like 'I am not Sombra' bad...

[Level Dasher]

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Oliver Christapher Davis

Oliver Christapher Davis

[Black--Soul]

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O.k. that really good Totaly fly over my head. With Super Sonic Speed

Thanks

[Greenhorne]

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[GlitchyFox]

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she either has been able to find out what they would put due to her past as a nurse or with how tricky she is sweet talked her way to getting a peak

[Vaguely Demented]

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Well yeah, however I doubt she would have that degree of perspective in mind.

[Vaguely Demented]

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Perhaps. I would think seeing it in first person perspective would have caused a reaction.

[Luckyfanisaac]

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There was a whole conversation about this. If you go to page 9 of the comments you’ll see it but this is my best at copying it.

Unable to monitor electrical activity of the heart, amount of blood circulating in the body is very low, possibly has too much iron in the blood due to unknown body implants.
tsaukpaetra
I've never heard of haemochromatosis being caused by steel implants or shrapnel, I don't think the body can absorb much iron from pieces of solid metal. Could be wrong since I haven't researched this.

edit: Haemochromatosis actually causes iron to collect in your eyes and it looks kinda cool.
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Look at the brown/gold ring around the iris.

That just made me laugh. I just get a kick out of every time someone is awestruck by me.
-DJ Hopper

And to answer the body implants
-The cyborg eyepiece is to help with his memory disability. Paraloxs all have photographic memory but he doesn’t. The eye pieces are made of a living metal that grows with him as his body grows. (So no iron harm because it’s not made of iron.)
-The cyborg fingers are just to have some physical reference when he uses his magic. Other paraloxs don’t need it but some prefer a physical reference.

-Also the strips keeps the body warm. They have to do this body reheat exercise to keep their body’s warm.
-He’s a winged earth pony. He has went through intense training and is able to fly if he puts enough earth pony magic into his wings.

I made a video of what his heart beat might sound like on a heart monitor.

[Greenhorne]

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[ChronoMitsurugi]

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Amazing. I love it.

[Tohshi]

I can't wait for more. this is the reason I check this site so regularly right now so you are doing amazing.

[Black--Soul]

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I would be surprised if she could have it Anyway anything is better than that...

[Silentwoodfire]

And Redheart is professional enough that Green will NEVER get a chance to show what she truly knows in a crisis setting or a mass injury event

[Vladistad]

It may be small, but it's still totally awesome! Thanks and good luck to you!

[Zepher]

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I really like that you take the time to answer the questions about your story, and I'm really enjoying it and the pacing even though this is the slowest paced story I've ever read, its still very enjoyable. I really look forward to where Green ends up, how she reacts to where she ends up and how things progress. This is a real treat to read, please keep this going!

[Greenhorne]

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[Ranakastrasz]

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Pretty much anything in the Human in Equestria? We have dismissed these claims. group I made a while back. sadly, few people joined, and nobody else has added stories/added posts/interacted with it.

Edit: Whoa, Anon3mous1 joined the group. Interesting.

[OceanBytez]

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thanks for the heads up. I joined too! I like how this idea is getting more fully explored.

[Lysander Shadowheart]

This might of been a tease from the story, but I can see Green rolling her eyes at this. It definitely adds to the story as a whole. I look forward to seeing what will happen next with Green.

[Black--Soul]

Auto reader cant handel the hole chapter.

[Sozmioi]

I could have sworn this was already posted before this point in the story

[harts fire]

i can say i am vary impressed with this story.

[Greenhorne]

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Glad to hear it!

[FOXTrot2]

I still say they should test her medical knowledge.

[Lynwood]

Love this little set of details.