Trust Once Lost

by Greenhorne

Musical Interlude

When I was not a filly, I found it rather silly
To think that I would be a pony here one day
I had fanfics to read, didn't know that I should even heed
Threats of Marehood that left me here to stay
You should be careful what you ask for, I don't know if this life's for meeee!

I'm a pony, trapped here forever!
Now my pe-nis is gone and my links to home are severed
And though I'm oh so far a way, I wish that I could saaay,
That I wasn't trapped here foreveeeeer
and now I see that I'm really not, so cleveeeeeer

Comments

[Boopy Doopy]

Best song

[tsaukpaetra]

Nominated for Best Readaptation.

[Ranakastrasz]

Very nice. Good chapter. I now can wait a few more weeks for the next.

[Viper Pit]

Now I'm sad that picture made me sad

[Moonlight_Mist]

The song is called APTHF, because it's an adaptation of the song BBBFF from A Canterlot Wedding.

[gakposter]

And now, we wait.

[Munro]

sad picture silly song xD

[PinkiePieFox]

haha, poor little green pony... *pets the green pony* Everythings gonna be alright.

[Greenhorne]

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[Eris Dis Harmonia]

And if you read this to the tune of Black Parade...

[PinkiePieFox]

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[FanOfMostEverything]

The big question is whether Green is audibly singing this to herself.

[Allsmiles]

Now my pe-nis is gone and my links to home are severed

(I'm sorry, I know this is supposed to be serious. But seeing "pe-nis" as an extended word of the song, just made me laugh.)

[Greenhorne]

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To explain your relocation
There's a simple explanation:
You're a toymaker's creation
Trapped inside a children's show!

And whichever way you wander
Ponyville is over yonder
This new chance you musn't squander
As we sing this silly song

When I wasn't yet a filly, I didn't know it would be so tricky
So I told a man you can do your worst,
If you can make me a mare then you'd be the first
I got myself in-to this mess, hope they-don't make me wear a dress.
Now my memories are absurd and I think they all misheard,
But I still know the words to this song.

When you're throat is feeling strangled
And your foreleg has been mangled
Don't you listen to the jangle
Of the bell that tolls for thee

Cause these chords are hypnotizing
And this whole world's harmonizing
So now Green please stop your crying
And Just sing along with me!

[Mr Swanky Hat]

Still working on the chapter, I know, I'm sorry.

Sorry? Sorry?! Sorry?! You think your sorry means anything to me?!!!! Well of course not, you got nothing to apologize for

[SWEETOLEBOB18]

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Department
Of
Could Be
Worse

It could of been your penis that was severed
and your links to home that were gone

[Vaguely Demented]

Well the fact that she is lamenting in musical form shows she’s adapting relatively quickly.

[ponyreaper1]

At least it’s a update

[shance]

Don't make sad pictures of little creatures, it hurts my heart...

[Tohshi]

don't worry we'll still be here when you get done with the update. Don't want to wait but will gladly do so for more.

[Cadberry]

How should this be sung? because I got like a bard singing version, and a country version.

[Greenhorne]

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Sung to the tune of this song. The middle verses are skipped.

[Silentwoodfire]

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*watches*

[Bast]

Poor green D:, things are terrible now but she is still alive to yet find something worth living for and once again find some happiness. Never Give Up Greeny!

[platogkrone]

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could of

[A Predatorial Horse]

He. He. You said penis.

[truebuckshot]

Wat.

[Knox Locke]

Nice lyric swap. Goes well with the story. Take your time with the chapter. Better a good chapter than a fast one!

For some reason, I could imagine Green getting bored and actually thinking this up just to keep herself entertained.

[Shanenator]

D'awwwww, poor little anon-filly...

[Lysander Shadowheart]

Very nice musical update.

Author's Note:
Still working on the chapter, I know, I'm sorry.

Sorry? Yeah no, I'm afraid I'll have to agree with Mr Swanky Hat here, you have nothing to be sorry about. Glad to see an update from you and I look forward to seeing what you will post next.

[Earthpatriot117]

Your story is AWESOME dude!!!

[Munro]

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wow that was awesome, thank you ^^
really made my day :)

[Black--Soul]

Nice song GLORIOUS comment section

Love the story

[gibbelblonk]

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never should of come here

[grim dash]

aaaaaaaahhhhhhhh

[FOXTrot2]

I'm a pony, trapped here forever! Now my pe-nis is gone and my links to home are severed And though I'm oh so far a way, I wish that I could saaay, That I wasn't trapped here foreveeeeer and now I see that I'm really not, so cleveeeeeer

Her poor penis it's gone forever.

[M4Tiger4014]

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12/10, great job, luv it.

[Caladis]

Songs or poems can be harder to write than chapters. I applaud this completely.

[The Local Rat Queen]

I'm a pony, trapped here forever! Now my pe-nis is gone and my links to home are severed And though I'm oh so far a way, I wish that I could saaay, That I wasn't trapped here foreveeeeer and now I see that I'm really not, so cleveeeeeer

OHHHHH MAN I WANNA SCREAM THIS IS GETTING GOOD

[Greenhorne]

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You are allowed to scream, I give you permission.

[darklight731]

Truly, this is one of the most songs of all time.

[Artich]

I'm a pony, trapped here forever! Now my pe-nis is gone and my links to home are severed

The Biggest tragedy to happen to a guy

[Evil Paladin]

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I fuckin LOVE this!