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Tangerine Blast


(He/They) Sometimes you just want to hear your favorite story told a little different

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This story is a sequel to Spark Visions of Twilight


The sun is back, the world is saved.

And yet, life has to go on. The brand new Bearers of the Elements, and all their families, have to deal with an upbruptly changing political landscape and just getting life back to normal.

Or finding what normal even is now that peace has been restored after years of the dark.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

Oooooh, I wasn't expecting a sequel! Looking forward to this!

It seems we will be spending time with the CMCs which is cool though I hope we get to see what Pinkie is doing too especially if it involves other characters like Rainbow Dash.

Mini sequals to Spark Visions of Twilight

Woops. :twilightoops: :twilightsheepish:

Might wanna fix that. :twilightsheepish:

It should be noted that before you read this comment, I haven't read the first story yet.

I know, I'm terrible.

Anyway, what struck me as odd and maybe even a bit too on the nose was Apple Bloom simply blurting out that they should be bonded. Seems like there could have been a more natural way to put that?

“Eh,” Scootaloo shrugged, “I don’t really pay attention to politics.”

"Didja not pay attention to th' sun comin' up?"
"Like I said, politics."

In any case, it's hard having destiny be your destiny. It certainly isn't the sort of thing that's immediately obvious. Though we'll see just how well Scootaloo can avoid what's meant to be...

Or not, if you don't come back to this topic. :derpytongue2:

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"Didja not pay attention to th' sun comin' up?"
"Like I said, politics."

Well, considering this is PonyWorld where the rulers move the goddamn sky-bound objects around, this wouldn't be far from the truth... ;]

“Some ponies think my sister and her friends are criminals.”
Scootaloo stared at her in bafflement. “For bringing back the sun?”
“For committin’ treason.”

Yeah, that's an understandable stance to take. Not a reasonable or logical one, but some people care more about the rule of law than, you know, insolation.

as she watched the other filly laugh herself horse

Booo. :rainbowlaugh:

Destiny has a way of making itself known. Scootaloo isn't going to get away that easily. Lovely follow-up to the previous chapter. looking forward to more.

And now to wait for Sweetie Belle.

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