• Published 14th Oct 2019
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The Greatest Spell I know - Lil Penpusher



After being shown Friendship by Twilight and her friends, Luster Dawn had quit the School of Magic and moved to Ponyville to stay with her friends. However, Twilight still wants to hear about her best student's lessons from time to time.

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Dear Princess Twilight...

I looked on towards the distant Horizon as the magical aura around my horn subsided. The Sun was rising now, and with it a new day dawned. This was far from the first time I raised the Sun all on my own, obviously. My coronation was many, many moons ago and Celestia and Luna had left me to my own devices ever since. I was admittedly a bit... frightened at the prospect of ruling such a big nation all on my own at first. All the mistakes and mishaps I could do by accident would have had immense consequences after all.

But then I heard my friends' voices as they waltzed into the throne room, one after another. I reminded myself that I wasn't alone. Not back then, not now, and hopefully never in the future either. The majority of statecraft was obviously still in my own hooves but my friends were more than willing and able to help when I needed them, despite living so far away in Ponyville. And so, time passed. Everypony grew older, and along with them, their friendships matured, growing stronger.

I couldn't help but smile as the sun rose above the fields and pastures of Equestria in the distance. The bright rays of light of the sun slowly but surely illuminated Canterlot, painting the skies above in a colourful mix of yellow and orange. I'd seen this colourful spectacle many times before now but... it still brought a tear to my eye, sometimes.

Today wasn't a normal day though. Or... well, I suppose no day is really all that 'normal' for the Princess and Ruler of Equestria. In any case, today was a special day. It was the first day in quite a long time that I would get to meet my most promising and faithful student of all again: Luster Dawn.

About three months ago, she had come to me in person, asking about the real importance of friendship. She believed friendship was temporary, that it would all wither away in due time. Accordingly, she thought friends to be nothing but a waste of time and effort, since all of them would be gone soon enough anyhow.

It's safe to say that she wasn't quite right on that. Me and my friends showed her what true friendship can look like, and showed her the magical place where we grew to become friends ourselves, the place I myself had been sent to when I was but a Unicorn student of Celestia: Ponyville.

And sure enough, it took her just a few hours to make friends there. She loved this small little town just as I did. In fact, she loved it so much that she came to me in due time once again. However, this time it wasn't about her disinterest in friendship, but rather the opposite.

She requested to leave the School of Magic, move to Ponyville and attend the School of Friendship instead. I wasn't exactly surprised, though. She reminded me a lot of... me. When I was younger and had been sent to Ponyville by Celestia. The only difference was that I was sent sort of against my will, while Luster was eager to go. Oh, and Nightmare Moon returned right as I got there, so there's that.

In any case, I was happy to support Luster and accept her request. Of course, with a slight, tiny little catch to it. I couldn't just let my most promising student wander off, after all. So I did what a certain Princess once did to me: I told her to report back to me and tell me about her friendship lessons in Ponyville. Although, unlike me, she didn't have a Dragon companion to send scrolls for her. Instead, she had to come all the way to Canterlot. Not that I minded that too much regardless. I read scrolls all-day now, which I guess comes as a perk with all the governing business and whatnot? I'll always enjoy meeting a pony face to face the most.

A part of me felt... weird though. This made me realise just how far I have gotten. After all... I used to be Luster. I used to be that faithful Student in Ponyville looking to explore the magic of friendship. And now? Now I ruled Equestria as the Princess of Friendship.

Times really do change. I'm just glad my friends haven't.


I waved towards Gallus as he opened the doors to the throne room. It was always a joy to see him all grown up, in armour and everything.

I marched on towards my throne as he closed the door behind me. Such a huge and yet empty room. Sometimes it felt a bit... lonely in there. Spike wasn't there to assist me that day either, he was off handling friendship business in Zebrica at that time. Stuff that a younger me probably would have done herself but... I was too busy to handle all of that on my own now. I'm just glad I have him as my assistant and friend to help me take care of things.

I landed on the throne and rested my hooves. Next to the throne was a small mountain of scrolls, all of which were, naturally, addressed to me. Problems, notes and requests of various kinds from various ponies and creatures, all directed to the Ruler of Equestria. I suppose it's a good thing I was never bothered by paperwork, otherwise these scrolls would have probably left a mark on me in a way.

I levitated the first scroll of the bunch in front of me and began reading.

To Princess Twilight Sparkle.

Hello Twilight! I've heard of your plans for a new Helping Hooves Music Festival. My new Manager brought me your message just now, and I'd be thrilled to come back and perform in Ponyville again!

I know I may be past my prime, but I'm not ready to quit, just yet. Especially not if I can sing for a good cause. My Performance all those moons ago made even me cry, and it showed me who I really was. You have AJ to thank for that one. I also want to thank you and the others for helping me deal with Svengallop back then. I got a new Manager ever since then, one who knows who I really am and doesn't try to make me someone I am not.

So thank you, Twilight. And please send this thank you to AJ, as well, if you can. I owe her a lot, and I'll be glad to see her, you and all the others again for the Helping Hooves Festival this year.

~ Rara

I smiled, remembering the Festival and Coloratura's performance back then. Once again, friendship had prevailed, and it had made her stronger.

Knock, knock

I wrapped up the scroll again and dropped it to the other side of the throne, the one where all the 'read' scrolls went.

"Come in," I said aloud, eyeing the doors.

After a brief delay, the doors opened, and revealed just the Pony I had been waiting for.

"Luster Dawn," I said with a bright smile as the young mare entered the room, "it's good to see you again."

"Yeah..." she replied anxiously, "it's nice to be back after all this time." She raised her head and looked around the room. "I almost forgot how big the Castle was. Everything in Ponyville is so much... smaller."

I giggled back at her. "Well, the Castle is pretty ancient, and it's where even Celestia and Luna used to rule from, after all. Obviously dimensions are gonna be a bit bigger compared to Ponyville."

"I... guess that makes sense, yeah." She nodded and stroked her hoof as she stared at me awkwardly. "Sooooo..."

I laughed again. "Luster, I know you're nervous. Trust me, I don't have to be an Alicorn Princess to see that. But there's no need. I'm your Teacher, your Friend. There's no need to be afraid of me." I smirked. "Right?"

"Yeah, you're right. I mean, I know that. Duh, obviously!" she spat out in quick succession. "What I mean is... that I'm just a bit on edge right now. Not because of you!" she reassured me, "It's... well, it's because..."

A worried frown formed on my face. "Luster? Is it because you couldn't make any friends?"

Luster shook her head in shock. "What!? Nononono! That's not it, Princess!" she said in denial. "It's... well, I'm just not good at presenting things in front of others, you see. That's part of why I never had many friends at all when I was young. I was always just too afraid to go out and present my ideas and thoughts to others, so I kept to myself and did it all on my own."

"I see." I stroked my chin for a moment. "I assume that's why you came to me for the first time? That's why you wanted to set-up your independent studies? So you could be alone?"

Luster's head sank to the ground and she gave out a deep sigh. "Yeah..." she answered, " I was just too afraid to make friends as a filly. That fear resulted in me just... never experiencing true friendship, I guess. It's why I came to think of friendship as something that wasn't worthwhile, which only made me more secluded from others..."

"Princess, I-" Luster gave out with a slight sob, "I'm sorry. You're the Princess of Friendship and I... I was your student. And yet I didn't care or know about friendship at all..."

I stood up from the throne and unfolded my wings. "Luster Dawn." With a mighty gust, I propelled myself in front of Luster, who began to shiver and cower as I towered above her. "You have no idea..!" I yelled with faked anger. "...no idea how similar I used to be."

Luster blinked and looked up to me with confusion. "W-what? Similar?" she asked, "but... you're the Princess of Friendship! You're basically the definition of friendliness, right?"

I smirked and laughed. "Not always, Luster. I used to be just a Student like you, who spent more time doing research and studies than going out and caring about friendship."

"You? A Student?" Luster asked in disbelief.

"Of Celestia, that's right. And it was because of that behaviour that I was sent to Ponyville by Celestia."

Luster stroked the back of her head, clearly a bit confused at all this. "Wait, so... you're saying you were just like me? And... you sent me to Ponyville to learn about friendship just like how Celestia sent you there?"

I nodded. "That was a long time ago, obviously. I was but a young Unicorn back then. It's when I met my best friends, the same ones that are still with me today. We stayed together throughout all these years, weathering the storm together. And it only made us stronger, both as ponies and as friends."

Luster raised a hoof to her chin as she thought.

"That's why I sent you to Ponyville. To experience the same thing as I did, to experience true friendship."

A bright smile formed on Luster's face as she leaned forward to embrace me, something that I happily exchanged.

"Speaking of which," I reminded myself as my wings embraced Luster, "I'm sure you've made some great discoveries back in Ponyville since we last met, right?"

"Oh," the pink-coated mare gave out, walking back as she left the hug. "Well, you could say that."

"I wanna hear all about it, Luster. You're my best Student, after all. I'm sure you learned some pretty interesting lessons out there."

"Well, first off, and this has less to do with friendship than the other things but," she went on, "did you know Kirin can turn into literal Demons? I mean, quite literally! They burst into flames and everything!"

I cackled. "I heard about that from two friends of mine that went to the Kirin once. I never saw it first-hoof though."

"Really? Huh." Luster thought about something for a moment. "Oh! Why don't you come visit me and my friends back in Ponyville someday? I do have a Kirin friend, after all. She'll show you what it looks like. Probably. I... don't really know how it works myself, though."

"I'd like that very much." I nodded. "However, what I would like even more is to hear about your friendship lessons."

"Oh! Right! Uh, sorry," she apologised. Her horn lit up in her magical aura as she opened her saddle bag and levitated a scroll out of it.

"A Scroll?" I said with surprise. "Did you... write your lessons down?"

She smiled back at me. "You could say that. As I said, I'm not good with words in public, so I used some free time I had on my own to write down all the most important things I experienced for you."

I took the scroll from her and levitated it over to me. I took a deep breath before unravelling the scroll. I felt... surprisingly old seeing that scroll. I used to be the Student, like her, and now... now I was the teacher. I was the Princess, the Ruler of all of Equestria. It certainly brought up memories of my early days in Ponyville. Good memories...

I opened the scroll and took a last glance at Luster before reading.

Dear Princess Twilight.

For many years I spent my days all on my own, secluded and locked away from everypony else. I refused to go out and meet others, let alone make friends. My isolation made me think that friends were unnecessary, that friendship was but a temporary experience and that it wasn't worth striving to make friends at all. But you and your friends have opened my eyes to the reality.

Through your wise words that day, I managed to not just make myself comfortable in Ponyville, I managed to make friends! I met many wonderful Ponies and creatures in Ponyville, and especially the School of Friendship. I was initially a bit... hesitant on signing up for the School, since my Mum and Dad run it and... you know, I felt it was a bit odd and embarrassing at first. But I reminded myself of the words you told me when you first sent me to Ponyville.

It's safe to say that I never quite believed I would make friends at all, let alone friends that weren't even Ponies at all. And yet, here I am! I've made a lovely group of friends, made up not just of Ponies but of Griffons, Kirin and Yaks too. Seeing all these creatures united, working together and becoming friends made me realize and believe in the magic of friendship.

I had a few problems getting started at School, but my friends (and occasionally my Mum, too) helped me out whenever they could. It was... new to me, really. I never before had people come to help me, especially not during studies. I always just did those on my own. But... thinking back, it probably made a lot of things a lot harder for me. Doing it all on your own is nice, but doing it with your friends is even better!

I know that you are eager to get to know what exactly I learned here in Ponyville about friendship, but the truth is that... I don't know where to start. I've sat down and thought about it for days now and I just can't figure out where to even start. Friendship as a whole is... just entirely new to me, still. This whole experience is something I never had before. To boil it down to the length of a single scroll like this would be... impossible. It wouldn't do it justice.

Rest assured, however, that I now firmly believe in the Magic of Friendship as you do, Princess. When I made my first friends after you sent me to Ponyville, I knew that this place was something special, that there was something magica about it. And indeed, I feel as if friendship surrounds all of Ponyville.

When I came to you and asked to leave the School of Magic so I could move to Ponyville and attend the School of Friendship instead, I didn't just want to be with my friends. I realised that the School of Magic couldn't teach me anything important anymore, unlike the School of Friendship and my friends in it.

I'm more than happy to tell you that I will be leaving behind the ways of the School of Magic, and that I will now focus my studies now a new kind of magic to me: the magic of friendship. You know how tireless I am when working on something, so expect to hear of results in this 'field of study' soon enough! My friends will surely be helping me all along the way.

And no matter what will happen here in Ponyville, I will always remember what you told me when I first got here.

"The Greatest Spell you'll know... is how the Magic of Friendship grows."


Your most faithful and thankful Student,
Luster Dawn

Comments ( 28 )

That was very good! I definitely understand why she would write everything down instead of presenting it herself. Stage fright can be an awful thing sometimes, and even when you're presenting to a friend, something official like this—especially if you're a perfectionist—can still be a bit nerve-racking.
I see you also see her as Starlight and Sunburst's daughter. Given what we saw of her cutie mark, it does make sense, and I believe it to be the case as well.
Great job!

9883225
Combine the Cutie Mark with the fact she's a Unicorn (with Sunburst and Starlight both being Unicorns after all) and the fact that she visited the School of Magic, with both her parents being BIG into Magic themselves. It kinda seems logical to me. But as with many things after the end, it's up to interpretation.

9883242
Thanks for pointing that one out!

And yeah, usually I do ask for someone to look over it once or twice (and do so myself at least once) but this time was... different. Ever since the end I just had this urgent need and feeling that I needed to write something related to the last episode. No kidding, honestly. Yesterday was pretty much just me being sad about the end of the show, while today I sat down and wrote this.

:twilightsmile:

9883252
Oh yeah, Season 9 was great, honestly. Although, they did also have a lot more options and opportunities with Season 9 compared to 8 and such. I mean, they knew it was the last Season, so they used it to resolve a lot of old problems and relationships. A lot of big things happened in this Season, especially during its second half.

Short, sweet, and lovely. :twilightsmile:

I enjoyed it. Great work!

9883365
Thanks, glad you enjoyed this little Tribute :twilightsmile:

9883252
Hearing you say that shocks me. I guess i've spent too much time on 4chan, nothing but people complaining about season 9 being the worst season to them. It's nice to meet people who actually enjoyed S9.

9883372
4chan: you'll never find a more wretched hive of scum and villainy.

Yeah, they just like to whine and moan about everything. S9 was great to me. I love Discord's character development in the first episode, Growing Up Is Hard To Do and Big Mac Question were great fan service, and the epilogue was the best fan service of all. I guess they're upset at what DIDN'T happen, but that's just too bad for them.

9883403
I personally wasn't a huge fan of that. It looked like there were more non-ponies than there were ponies, which irks me because it's Equestria and My Little Pony, not My Little Creature, but other than that, i did love the students at the school!

9883404
Personally, if I may, I found it to be a nice throwback and round-up for the series. It showed us most of the races and species we got to know throughout the Show and showed that they could all live together, after all. Even the Dragons and Griffons could live in peace and harmony, after all. I obviously want it to be centered around Ponies still, hence the show's name, but it was a great addition to show during the very final episode. Plus, it was just 4 shots for so in Canterlot at the start. After that, we see Ponyville still remaining inhabited mainly by Ponies (besides the School).

The grammar was a tad sloppy at times, but this was really sweet!

Have a Thumbs Up!
:)

9883949
Mainly just bad habits I transfer over to English from my native tongue. Not exactly helpful for writing stories :trollestia:

Thank you, though! Glad you liked it! :heart:

9883959
Thank you for writing it!

(BTW, as of a few hours ago Luster has a character tag now, in case you want to put it on this story.)

The fact that Starlight and Sunburst are Luster's parents makes me wonder how Luster WASN'T brought up into friendship. I feel like there's a story there.

9884572
It's not officially confirmed that Starlight and Sunburst are her parents, but they are in my head canon. I have a few ideas on how Luster might have turned out that way.

1. Sunburst and Starlight are kind of "absentee" parents. Running the school takes most of their time, so Luster spent a lot of time on her own growing up. She heard her parents talk about friendship a lot, but they were never really invested in helping her make friends. It could end up being a nice "We were so concerned about helping others learn the value of friendship that we never really taught our own daughter!" lesson for the StarBurst duo. We've seen how Starlight and Sunburst's parents are. It's not inconceivable that they were trying to avoid their own parents' mistakes, and in doing so, went too far in the opposite direction.

2. After she started studying with Twilight, Luster became engrossed in her studies and books. Much like Twilight did. She had good friends when she was younger, but those faded as she threw herself into her work.

3. She could be going through a bit of a "rebellious teen" phase. She was taught about friendship by her parents and Twilight, but her own personal experience is that friendships don't last. She eventually decides they're not necessary.

9884572
There were a few subtle hints in the episode itself. When Twilight and company enter the school and see Starlight and Sunburst, Starlight waves excitedly. If you pay close attention, you see that she's waving at Luster. When they're touring the school, Sunburst and Starlight are walking next to her for most of the tour.

On Twitter, Jim Miller said that he doesn't think they're her parents, but Josh Haber (the lead writer for the episode) does.

It's up to us, and the idea is too sweet to NOT be my head canon.

9885436
Considering it wasn't confirmed, there are a lot of opportunities that could come with either option.

9885436
Quick note that, from the perspective of the writers, it would be a pretty dumb/bad move to confirm much of anything. Especially in a fandom like this one, which LIVES off of fandom projects which includes fanfiction, it would just be best to not confirm ships, deaths or anything of the sort. They can HINT at things, and you may say "well, it's pretty much confirmed now" but without the writers going out of their way to tell us that these assumptions are 100% true, we will never know. That's kind of a good thing, though. Leaves us with plenty of room for stories! :moustache:

9883225
Her mannerisms and speech patterns definitely remind me of Starlight, too.

9885556
Jim basically confirmed that Granny Smith and Goldie Delicious are no longer with us in The Last Problem.

Someone asked about them since AJ wears Granny's scarf. His answer: "No one lives forever."

This was a very nice story, with a lot of little callbacks. Very well done!

9886424
Yeah, I know. I saw the Q&A with him, sad times. :ajsleepy:

9886919
A hard but necessary lesson. Death is an unavoidable part of life.

All of Season Nine had this theme as a common thread: nothing lasts forever. Like Yona says: "Yaks know things not forever. That's why smash and rebuild!"

9887434
Yes I agree. A lot fics have Twilight outliving her friends now, but Miller said the ending was open to interpretation. Which is why I'm going to make a happy ending for the Mane 6 in my story.

And it will continue to grow. Nice story

9885556
Hello twilight and spiteful definitely outlive her friends. Alternatives is twilight somehow dies first which is even worse.

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