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superfun

superfun #1 · Oct 14th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Short, but sweet, and I love it.

Herald of Opera

Herald of Opera #2 · Oct 14th, 2019 · 1 · ·

This pairing deserves each other, although I prefer the version where they don't need to be mind-controlled into it (and the creatures we care about don't find out until he shows up to his sister's wedding with a "plus one")

Graglithan The Greater

Graglithan The Greater #3 · Oct 14th, 2019 · 3 · ·

9882148 I like the idea of Fluttershy and Friends finding out about it the same way they found out Twilight had a Brother. Just imagine it.

"Zephyr... getting married?..." *Confused Fluttershy Noises*
"Is that why he stopped chasing me?"
"Ah don't think that's the important bit here Dash."

PonyDragon #4 · Oct 16th, 2019 · · ·

Why not use one rock to kill two very annoying birds?

: "But... but how could you even think of something like that?"
: *sigh* "It's just an expression Flutters."

"Polka dot?" Rainbow asked which earned a glare from the alchemist.
"Rhyming is hard, you think I have all my answers written on a card?"
"Nope."

I had once seen a comic where Zecora was tricked to end an sentence with "orange"...

"Good. Get the hell out of my house!"

: *looks back into the room*
: "That mess will take hours to clean up. And the smell..."

Nice story!
I nejoyed reading it.

Mirror Star #5 · Oct 18th, 2019 · 1 · ·

While I do prefer Zephyr with Tree Hugger, I think I could get on board with this pair despite the way it was made here.
Great work.

OmniFox

OmniFox #6 · Nov 3rd, 2019 · · ·

I wonder if Spike can get with 4 ladies at once?

Ninjadeadbeard #7 · Dec 4th, 2019 · 1 · 1 ·

9890243
Why would you inflict such a fate onto Tree Hugger? What did she do to you?

Shakespearicles

Shakespearicles #8 · Dec 14th, 2019 · 3 · ·

Little did Rainbow know that Zephyr Breeze was adopted by Fluttershy's family, and Lightning Dust is his estranged twin sister.

Deergenerate #9 · Dec 14th, 2019 · · ·

Well that just makes Rainbow Dash the villain XD

Shakespearicles

Shakespearicles #10 · Dec 14th, 2019 · 3 · ·

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... was she not, before?

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