Everyone at Crystal Prep knows Sunset Shimmer, right? She's a bit rough around the edges, but that only makes her posh nature stand out even more. She's in the top three for any possible competition. Always striving to be the best.
But, how come? Who and what led her to be this way? Is she as okay as she seems?
Questions nobody has ever really cared enough to ask. After all, why should they? She's already perfect, so why should it matter?
Sunset knows why. She just wishes somebody would ask.
Chapters (5)
oh crap
I'm totally in for this ride
I hope things ends well for sunset
Some things to note about general things to do with the story here.
Ugh. Not really happy with this chapter, and it feels like the plot is way too rushed. But I want to move the plot along, instead of just being plain exposition.
So far, I'm liking this and sticking to it, I'm curious how all this will end.
Though I think I found one or two, eh, inconsistencies? I could DM you about it if you want, as I feel this is too public.
Also, if you want to get more exposition, you can add your stories to different groups and do promos, that will surely raise up views and future comments.
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Sure, DM me.
And thanks for the tip!
Good lord, this is a heartbreaking story.
Holy shit...
I really, truly hope none of this is based on personal experience.
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Did I read your name right?
AAaaaA
No big deal, just an author I like reading my story. No big deal.
Also, that's generally what I try to go for.
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Oh heck! And now you're an author I like!
omg actually I'm super flattered like wow I'm just some dumb nerd who projects her sad shit in fanfics but i guess I'm famous now? That's what this is right? I'm officially a Cool Kid now, frick yeah.
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It's not, thankfully.
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Frick yeah
Welp, I'm invested.