Letters
Lemon Zest, Indigo Zap, Sugarcoat, Sour Sweet, and Sunny Flare is leading Spike to Zesty Barn house. Spike can't wait to see the surprise he's in store. He sees a quill and paper.
"Hey, girls. Mind waiting a few moments. I need to write a letter to Princess Luna."
"Sure, Spike," Lemon said. "I'll wait for you outside while the girls head to the Zesty Barn house."
"Sounds good. Thanks," Spike said. He grabs a quill and paper and starts writing.
Dear Princess Luna,
My dreams of torment have come to an end. I don't think I can ever forgive Twilight, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, and Applejack. I can forgive Fluttershy. She hasn't done much damage to me now that I think about it. I did overreact towards her the other night. Especially when I gave her my death glare in anger. Twilight Sparkle and the rest I mentioned, I don't think I can forgive them. They have serious issues that need to be addressed. I do hope you can find a way to set them straight, Princess Luna. Twilight Sparkle and the others have caused so much physical and emotional trauma. That is hard to forgive. Every day its either I get hit, whack, and hurt or I'm left behind. I did offer my services to help, now that I think about it, they took advantage of me. Another reason why I am unable to forgive Twilight and her friends. I know my flaws when I see it. I succumb to Rarity's genuine beauty to help her more. I've told my friends that I'll never forgive them. However, I think with much needed time and recovery, I'll find it in my heart to forgive to move on. For now, I need my friends. I need them to help me grow. Become someone I want to be. Not be a slave or an assistant with no benefits. I want to be a happy dragon. I'll continue to write to you from time to time, Princess Luna.
Yours Truly,
Spike the Dragon
Spike finished writing his letter to Princess Luna. He uses his fire breath to mail the letter to Princess Luna.
In a few moments, Princess Luna receives her first letter from Spike. After a few minutes of reading, she starts writing her letter.
Dear Spike,
I do have plans in store for Twilight and her friends. I am glad to know you are forgiving Fluttershy. When Princess Celestia read your journal out loud, Fluttershy's name wasn't mentioned as much despite having her fill with neglecting you. It takes time to forgive. I'm not sure if I'll ever forgive my sister. Perhaps in time, I can if she decides to turn things around for the better. As for Twilight Sparkle, I am aware of her OCD technicalities, unlike Princess Celestia. I shall prepare an assignment for Twilight and how she shall overcome her OCD as the next ruler of Equestria. Thou shall wait upon further inspection of Twilight's performance in the future. As for the former wielders of the Elements of Harmony, I shall put them on a redemption path to better themselves for the sake of Friendship. I shall come in contact with you from time to time. I shall visit you as well. With my newer duties as Ruler of Equestria, I'll be keeping track of Daybreaker and her activities. If you and your new friends locate Daybreaker, contact me, and we'll confront her together.
Sincerely,
Princess Luna
Princess Luna finished writing her letter then mails it to Spike. She looks up at the sky. She uses her magic to lower down the sun then uses her magic to raise the moon.
"A wonderful night," Princess Luna states. "I shall commence my nightly duties," Princess Luna enters the dream realm to help anypony with their nightmares.
Spike receives a letter from Princess Luna. After a few moments of reading, he decides to tell his friends what Luna wrote to him. They should know what's going on. Spike meets up with Lemon Zest outside. He hands her the letter for her to read.
"Well, Spike. It's up to you to forgive or forget. I'll support your decisions. I do hope Princess Twilight does set herself right, for the betterment of all of Equestria," Lemon said. "Now, its time to take you to the barn house," Lemon said as she escorts Spike to the barn house.
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I'm glad that Spike is forgiving Fluttershy.
I've started reading this and wow man you dont hold back and you have a pretty good grip on a darker version of twilight here shes going nuts really fast nice job
So I just got to the arise in new beginnings chapter you made and the commentabout spike being a strong willed person and how others would end it before finding a way to get better left me thinking that there could be a darker alternative version to this if you wanted it done
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Thank you
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Yea.
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Neat are you planning to do a darker alternative version where spike gave up instead of leaving
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Well, Spike runs away cause he's tired of the same routine, the physical and emotional trauma he goes through nearly every day. He wants to have a life like Twilight gets to have.
Wow 2 chapters right out of the gate, sweet!👍
Out of all Mane Six I gotta agree that Flutters was the least abusive toward Spike during those first 4 seasons. I hope you have something planned for the remaining Mane 5 to lead them into the correct path from here on out.
As for Spike I respect that he doesn't want anything to do with them right now, hope that after a bit of time he can finally forgives them.
Gotta wonder though what you have planned now for Daybreaker, looking forward to that!😉
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You'll be surprised with Daybreaker later in the story.
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Cool
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That was his motive.
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I know I just ment it could have been much darker for him which you havena nack for
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Well, trying a story that isn't too dark for.
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For a change I get ya it's good to branch out styles
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I can use a little bit of it but not too much of it.
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At this point, it's made interest to me that Twilight has finally seen the light & is willing to better herself for the good of others & is no longer taking shortcuts to accomplish them. Hopefully her friends will following suit as well.
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Seeing what Spike went through throughout his dreams & basically in the series seriously makes me want to STRANGLE the mane six with my bare hands. But I won't, let's hold back & let Princess Luna decide their fates instead. I'm just glad the CMC's were spared from all this for compared to their sisters, It's feels more like THEY should be the NEW BEARERS to the E.O.H. as well.
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Too young to bear the elements.
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Good.
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True. It's just that I see the elements more in them than their siblings. For through it all, they've manage to steer clear of their sisters actions & not to stoop to their level in order to find their C.M's.
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Exactly.
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True.
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Exactly.
Luna certainly makes a better princess Equestria needs, seeing how she notices Twilight's OCD problem and not giving in to the demands of selfish ponies, things Celestia failed in that regard. If that keeps up, Luna might turn Equestria into a republic.
You know what I'd like to see next in this story if you get another writer's block and believe it can work? A chapter showing three moments where a pair of characters talk about recent events, specifically Twilight and one of her friends, Rainbow Dash and Discord, and Cadance and Shining Armor. Twilight and Rainbow Dash wonder why Celestia turned out to be the bad guy they worshiped and swore loyalty to while Shining feels frustrated and disappointed in his sister and Celestia for those bad things they did.
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Hmm I'll look further into that.
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an update to a post I made, it seems he forgave fluttershy so he's making progress on that front. Except for twilight, this twilight takes after this celestia too much to be forgiven on the same level as the others until she gets the help she needs.
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Twilight is going in a different direction under Luna's wing. Forgiveness needs time. Spike needs time adjust with everything he's going through. He just relived the memories he had during his sleep right after everyone else has their memories restored.
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When do you think the next chapter is coming?
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Sometime later today or tomorrow. Working on two chapters.
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WOW, TWO for ONE SPECIAL again.
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Well, originally I was working on one until another idea came to my mind. It was too good to let it go so I'm working on that chapter as we speak. That chapter will come first then the other one I was previously working on.
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Sweet.