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Grand_Moff_Pony


Author & Pre-reader; Chief Apprentice in Loyal's House of Fanfic; Lt. in the Army of Biscuit; Does Bad Things for Bad Horse

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With their ten year anniversary fast approaching, Lyra is busily preparing to ask BonBon a very big question. But when chaos engulfs Ponyville once again, all of her plans are turned upside-down.

Sometimes though, it's the things you can't plan for that mean the most.


Directly follows events shown in episode 9x23 - "The Big Mac Question"
Pre-reading assistance from the amazing Winston!

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Comments ( 21 )

This somewhat reminds me of that Christmas Gift story where the husband and wife buy something for them, but they sold the other item required for it to get the gift for their love.

As it should be

axxuy #3 · 1 week ago · · ·

Awww, this is sweet.

Story's up, yay!

Not bad, but I feel like it could've been a little longer.

9874965
The temptation was there for sure. But I knew if I tried to build it out too much I'd lose momentum and eventually flounder the whole thing. So I set myself a bit of a limit. ;)

Thanks for giving it a read though! I appreciate the feedback! :)

9874850

that Christmas Gift story where the husband and wife buy something for them, but they sold the other item required for it to get the gift for their love.

That would be The Gift of the Magi

9875103
Ah, thanks! I couldn't remember the exact title of that story, lol.

Great to see both of you in the comments section! Thanks for popping in!

This story makes me think of this

9875460
Dawww, that's awesome. :)

Nice. :)

Aww, gotta love they made it cannon :yay:

So. Stinking. Cute! :rainbowkiss:

Magnificent stuff, especially adding even more layers to the Sugarmac engagement. Thank you for it.

Excellent story. Ordinarily, I'd offer a critique, but it pretty much seems complete, and I don't think there's much you could do to improve it.

It was so wonderful to see our favorite best friends get their moment. Even if it was blink and you'd miss it. Wonderful as always Moff. Now we just need Rose to find her a stallion who's light on his feet..😁

9875862
I'm working on it, I promise. :)

Cute!
A nice addition to the moment in the show.

9877163
Thanks! I appreciate the feedback. :)

I think I got diabetes now.

I stepped up to her and brushed a hoof through her mane. “Because you never eat sweets for breakfast, so the only reason you’d go to the bakery that early in the day is to place an advance order without me around. Because White Chocolate Raspberry is my favorite cake, and I know that if you went out of your way to order a cake it’d be that one. And—” I leaned in and pecked her on the lips “—it’s exactly the type of thing I’d do a few days before a big anniversary dinner with the mare I loved.”

This was a painfully adorable moment :heart: I'm so glad you wrote this :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :twilightblush:

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