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Werewolf Cheetara
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Werewolf Cheetara
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Needs editing, bad. Also, everything is back to being hunky-dory way too quick.
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Sorry about that. I went ahead and fixed up spelling errors, and gave the paragraphs more space. As for the ending...Well, Everything is not what t seems. Plus, It's not entirely over yet. But that's gonna be another short story.
Quite a few mistakes of all kinds are present. It's hard to enjoy the story because of those.
Also, choice of words can be rather questionable sometimes. Have you tried to read the whole text before publishing? Sometimes it's all you need to know that a new round of editing is needed.
P.S. I don't see a 'Human' tag, but, for some reason, you use 'woman' instead of a 'mare' and a 'man' instead of a 'stallion'. Why?
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It's an alternate universe.
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You say mistakes, and don't provide examples.
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Started to correct the story a bit, your lordship.
I laughed pretty hard when they pissed on her; shows how much the internet has twisted my sense of humor!
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Anyone with a twisted sense of humor is always welcomed.
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New speaker should have a new paragraph.
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Ah, okay.
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Went and corrected that error. TBH, not the best writer, Grammer wise.