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Twilight Star


Twilight and Luna: two mares made for each other

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As the day progressed, Twilight Sparkle began to get more nervous, each time the sun moved, more she feared she wouldn't deliver a letter to Princess Celestia in time. Coming up to talk to herself. But, Spike managed to get Twilight out of the trance and handed over the box of Cupcakes. Twilight Sparkle, go to the picnic. But instead of asking for help to help her find a friendship problem, she decides to ask if her friends needs her help.

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Boutique Carrosel

Wrong spelling and its the other way round, "Carousel Boutique"

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Oops Sorry. I already corrected

So... if someone acted sensibly, the plot would have resolved itself without incident?

One thing puzzles me here: why would Celestia have the other girls write letters about what they learned when none of them were around this time?

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Celestia's reason for saying this was so that the Twilight friends didn't think they needed to deliver a letter to Celestia every day. It was for Twilight's friends not to be overwhelmed like Twilight did.

i liked the general idea and outcome, but this was super rough to read.

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