Auntie Pinkie Pie is watching us this week. My head hurts.
Thank you to my pre-reader, Annie_8472, and to everyone in FimFiction's Discord server who gave me advice on this story—too numerous to mention individually.
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I'm a practising Seventh-Day Adventist Christian trying to improve his stroy writing and drawing skills.
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A delightful small story, nice job!
9878560
Thanks.
Aww.. this is beautiful! Such a simple subject.. but so meaningful here! Nice, nice work.
9878572
Thanks. This was partially written off personal experience.
Nice little slice of life story. My only thing is that Pound Cake's narrative voice doesn't really fit that of an 8 year old.
Nice, very nice. Would have liked more, but it's good.
9879226
Glad you liked it. I was going for vocabulary selection more than critical thinking and grammar.
9879534
This was written as a little practice story while I was working on A Tale of Two Worlds chapter 6.