• Member Since 22nd Oct, 2017
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Shadow_8472


I'm a practising Seventh-Day Adventist Christian trying to improve his stroy writing and drawing skills.

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Auntie Pinkie Pie is watching us this week. My head hurts.


Thank you to my pre-reader, Annie_8472, and to everyone in FimFiction's Discord server who gave me advice on this story—too numerous to mention individually.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

A delightful small story, nice job!

Aww.. this is beautiful! Such a simple subject.. but so meaningful here! Nice, nice work. :pinkiesad2:

9878572
Thanks. This was partially written off personal experience.

Nice little slice of life story. My only thing is that Pound Cake's narrative voice doesn't really fit that of an 8 year old.

Nice, very nice. Would have liked more, but it's good.

9879226
Glad you liked it. I was going for vocabulary selection more than critical thinking and grammar.

9879534
This was written as a little practice story while I was working on A Tale of Two Worlds chapter 6.

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