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“There are three things all wise men fear: the sea in storm, a night with no moon, and the anger of a gentle man.” - Patrick Rothfuss

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Star Swirled was supposed to be a fun music festival and a chance to see some awesome bands over the course of two days.

That was several months ago, and thanks to a time loop Sunset Shimmer is still on Day 1.

After all the confusion, after the rage, after the desperation - she's emotionally tapped out.

Fortunately, she's not alone.


Written (but not completed) for the No Author Left Unnoticed competition, with the prompt "Sleep doesn't help if it's your soul that's tired." Finished anyway later on because I can't bear to leave work half-completed.

Reviewed here by The Red Parade.

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I enjoyed it, rather weird but fun
Thank you

I hope she get's fine in the end :pinkiesad2:

Sometimes we just need to breakdown. Sunset is fortunate she has someone there willing to help pick up the pieces.

That was a very nice story. Sorry it never made it to the competition, but I think it would have done marvelously!

While the screen stayed cracked, the phone itself sprang back to life. Perfect.

Also, I don't know why, but this feels like the best metaphor for Sunset's life as I can imagine.

Man, this was really, really good. This is something that could've been in the movie. More people ought to read this.

This sure was great nad I'm glad twilight made sunset feel happy that all she's done wasn't just on purpose but to happen and I really like the ending since I just love sciset moments epically fan made ones

You told me to tell you 'Edge Of Tomorrow' to confirm this is real, and then you started ranting about how the novel was better.

Well, yes, Twilight really sees herself in the protagonist. Especially when she starts cracking alien skulls with a baseball bat. :raritywink:

Thank you for seeing this through. I admit, I find it hard to take off the shipping goggles with these two, but even from a Platonic perspective, this was some fantastic friendshipping.

Impressed she managed 174 times before an existential crisis.

Hey there. This was reviewed here. Thanks for submitting! Deuces!

A great little read and another one for the group. It's a shame more people haven't explored this part of the canon.

After living part of a year in a loop I would go a little nuts too. And this doesn't really sound like they really tried to help. Truthfully I can't remember them even trying to find what causing the problem. They know that sunset is the only one to remember that time is on a loop but instead of stopping this so that they can actually grow up and get adult jobs sunset had to do it all.

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