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dirty little secret


I tried so far… and got so hard… but in the end, it didn't even matter at all. (Direct Support)

Comments ( 18 )

You have some character labelling issues, at least at the start of the story. Confusing Pickle and Barley and swapping pronouns.

9862286
Do I? Hm... I’ll have to go through and look for that. I’d thought I had it clear...
Edit:
Oh wow, how did I screw it up that badly? That was awful!
Should all be fixed now!

That did not go how I was expecting it to go at all...

Not saying it was badly written or anything, though.

9913501
Heh, yeah ... this one is a bit out of the norm for me. It was pretty interesting to do, though.

Where did the Barrel Twins come from?

9913526
Rainbow Roadtrip

That's a lot of asses. :pinkiesick:

Where are the Barrel Twins from and why is there such a disproportionate amount of porn about them?

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Rainbow Roadtrip.

9913607
Yeah ... not everybody’s thing.

Looks promising. I've added it to my read later list!

Now I'd like to see Scootaloo fucking the twins to see whose the biggest RD fan

9914501
Really not a whole lot of it, though...

9915124
But ... how would that help decide who’s the biggest Rainbow Dash fan?
Well, besides porn logic.

9915722
Hmmmmmm. Who learned the most from Rainbow Dash. Er. Maybe just porn logic.

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But still ... you know ... it’s easier to write if it actually makes sense...

10022717
Fine. If you want to use logic-logic, I won't stop you. *Pouts in an overly-dramatic and obviously fake way.*

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