Scout Frost is staying the summer with her aunt in the equestrian coastal city of Neigh Orleans, little does she know that magical mischief abounds on a nearby island and she gets caught in the crossfire. But, several new friends are there to help her through it, and she's ready to do whatever it takes to discover the purpose of their transformation.
*I DON'T KNOW WHO THE ARTIST OF MY COVER IS!* Paigeeworld shut down, so I can't find them! If you are the artist and would like me to take your art down, please notify me and it will be done!
Chapters (1)
I thought that was Lyra :/
9852584
Sorry to disappoint!
Good start, let´s see if you can keep that up :)
9852676
Thank you very much! If you have any criticism now or in the future, I'd love to hear it!
You misspelled mischief in the long summary.
Also your Long summary and Short summary are the same, not needed but if you like , have a little fun with it.
Read through it.
A few mistakes but nothing major.
I enjoyed it.
what is this a crossover of anyway?
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H2o Just Add Water/Mako Mermaids
9852684 The characters in this story is not the best that I've seen but I hope she can be improved
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Thank you for the read, may I please have details on how I can improve?
10309506
Your OC's dose she have a background ground story coming up as I didn't feel connected with the main character as a reader
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I'm planning on background coming through as the characters get to know each other but I can see how this would pose a problem with trying to connect with them.
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Ah I see then I'll look forward to reading more.