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ShirtMechanic


New to the fandom and franchise. Also love the Dragon Ball series.

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Vegeta came to a final decision, his final act. He sacrificed himself for the betterment of his planet, his friends, his family. But his body wasn't found, he was given a second chance, traveled across the universe to a different dimension on a planet named eques. His new adventure starts, now!

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YES! A new DBZ crossover! Looking forward to the net chapter.

Nice seeing lines from the origonal Funimation dub of Z insted of seeing lines from Kai.

Vegeta in Equestria. Oh, these are enjoyable. Taking all bets on how long before the cuteness gets to Vegeta!

Great story! Vegeta my second favorite while Gohan my first favorite. Can't wait for the next story!

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Don’t worry, I plane for the next Chapter to be released by Sunday. :twilightsmile:

So I'm betting it's an offer of residency. Potentially an offer to whip the guards into shape.

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Expectation:

So I'm betting it's an offer of residency. Potentially an offer to whip the guards into shape.

Reality:
Petrification by Rainbow Death Beam™

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That is a possibility. But it seems just a bit overkill right this second

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I did want Vegeta to show off until he did the Saiyan Pride yell. That’s when I made him almost go serious, but he also ate half a senzu bean in the first chapter, so he was at half strength.

Luna went to where Rainbow Dash was hiding, "What is it Element of Honesty?" Luna questioned.

Loyalty, not Honesty.

Two ways this could go.
1. He tells them the story.
2. He gets mad for the violated privacy, and possibly destroys something. Probably not.

Una

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Vegeta can blow up planets casually at the start of DBZ with a power level of 17,000. By the majin saga his power is thousands of times more. Also, even at 10% power blowing up a planet is next to nothing for him. NMM is simply a flick of his fingers from beinging defeated, I would also say the same for discord and anything else that the MLP world has to offer.

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That's against people that fight with ki, ponies (and every other race in mlp) use magic which could have a effect on his ki. For example a simple ki ball shot at a earth rock would destroy it but the same ki ball shot at a equestrian rock could just crack it.

This is all my own theory and how I would write it so anyone with ki that's thrown into the mlp universe wouldn't be overpowered

Vegeta, at the Grand Galloping Gala...I'll start preparing the damage bill.

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Bet you that one of the nobles will call him along the likes of “monkey” or hairless ape” and he’s going to get (understandably) pissed.

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Maybe, maybe not. You’ll have to see in the next few chapters.

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH

Hmm. So we might just get Gogeta afterall. Though, if that's the case, I wonder how Bulma will take Vegeta's feelings for Rainbow...

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Maybe the way if Vegito stayed fussed? I’m still think on how that’ll go.

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Guess we'll just have to wait and see. On a side note, I did notice this

havent had the acastion

I believe you meant occasion?

Will Vegeta be the only character from Dragon Ball Z who's a main character in this story?

Hopefully there's an Epic Battle in Equestria. (EBiE)

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Vegeta is the main character in this story, others will be included later on, but it depends on who the characters are.

Well... that's one way around Bulma and Trunks. That fight scene was done pretty well, good job.

Just to let you know, If Goku used Kaio-ken as a Super Saiyan while not in otherworld, it kill him. He was however able to do it in Blue through the form's Ki control.

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That’s why it died out really quickly, knowing it was going to tear his body apart. It didn’t even last a minute.

Comment posted by ShirtMechanic deleted Oct 13th, 2019

I'm torn. I'd like to think Vegeta wouldn't be that bull headed to blame EVERYTHING on Goku, but then, it IS Vegeta...

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But think about it, Goku had the chance to kill Majin Buu, but let two children to kill a villain millions of years old with more experience then them.

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Yeah, that he did do. Although, if I remember right, after pulling out 3, he barely had enough time left among the living to teach them Fusion. Goku might not be the smartest, but he can play the long game in a fight.

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At the same time, Goku does have an extreme lack of tact. He could have handled that better.

Okay, I am enjoying the story, but I got one major gripe: Vegeta. Is. Married!! So even if he would be attracted to Rainbow Dash, he wouldn't be this accepting of her advances, especially when his wife and son just died. (Although you technically get that wrong, Gotenks should still be fighting Majin Buu)

'The Prince is standing on clouds! He's Jesus... no wait... Jesus stood on water, not clouds... Welp'

Well Jesus could probably stand on clouds because they are made from water

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