• Published 25th Sep 2019
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Anon-a-Miss: A.I - CillianChamp



After committed suicide, Sunset Shimmer revives as an Artificial Intelligent Doll

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A Girl named Lorcan

Lorcan Darcy, a sixteen year old girl with blue hair and a sad smile, was walking downtown. She is struggling the loss of her older twin sister Laura-Belle Darcy before her twelfth birthday. Her parents are divorced afterward. Her mother's a lawyer in Chicago and her father's a cartoonist whose animation studio is in Los Angeles. She stayed in Brooklyn with her younger brother Max and younger sister Dawn.

She's walking down to the toy store to buy a birthday present for Dawn. She was convinced by her to purchase the new AI doll called Friendship Doll, created by the DESTINY Corporation. Lorcan decided to buy her doll for her seventh birthday. She and Dawn have a best sister relationship. When Lorcan check the aisles where the dolls are, she saw the Friendship Dolls, the dolls shows the identical image of the Mane 7, especially Sunset Shimmer. She decided to buy Sunset Shimmer, because she's Dawn's favorite.

At night, Lorcan's sleeping on the couch after finishing wrapping the doll up. Someone walked inside of the living room and about to wake her up. When Lorcan wakes up, she screamed along with her. The thing removed her mask and it happens to be Dawn Darcy, a seven year old girl.

"Dawn, what are you doing? Why did you scream?" Lorcan asked her little sister after she screamed.

"Because you scared me." Dawn answers, Lorcan smiles and let her lay beside her.

"It's the middle of the night, why are you awake?" Lorcan asked her sister as she sits on her legs.

"I'm too excited, Lorcan." Dawn answers as Lorcan smiles.

"Well it is your birthday, but we're not celebrating it yet." Lorcan said to her sister while smiling and hold her hand. "Come on. Let's get you back to bed."

In Dawn's bedroom, Lorcan put her to bed. She watches her sleeping before giving her a kiss. She loves her younger siblings and looks after them. She walks out of Dawn's bedroom. She walks over to her Max's bedroom to check on him. Max Darcy is a fourteen year old boy. He wakes up and sees her.

"Lorcan." Max said after waking up. "Um, uh, what time is it?"

Lorcan removed his duvet, revealing he's not asleep, he just went out till his curfew. "It's past your curfew. That's what time it is."

"Lorcan, I'm-I'm fourteen. Why do I have to be home by midnight?" Max asked his older sister.

"Because I wanna know that you're safe, Max. I'm worried about you. Plus, you're starting high school in six months." Lorcan answers about her worrying about him.

"Just, please don't tell Mom and Dad, okay? I just can't handle another one of his lectures." Max said to Lorcan about not telling their parents.

Lorcan smiles and chuckles. "Okay. Don't mess with Mom tomorrow. I just want your sister's birthday to be perfect." She said.

"Yeah, so do I. Me too." Max said. He and Dawn have a good brother-sister relationship. Lorcan give him a big kiss.

"Okay, goodnight." Lorcan said before walking out of his bedroom.

"Goodnight." Max said before she walked out closed the door.


The next day, Lorcan walked over to the door as the doorbell ring. It's her parents, Bill and Lisa. She guide them to the living room. She got her birthday present for Dawn ready. When Dawn blow out the candles of her birthday cake. The others cheered.

"Happy birthday, sweetheart." Bill said to Dawn.

"Happy birthday, baby." Lisa said to Dawn.

Max give Dawn his birthday present. "Happy birthday, Dawn." He said as Dawn opening her birthday. It's a PlayStation store card.

"Really, Max?" Dawn asked him while smiling.

"Yeah, I know I bought you PS4 and helped you set up the account for PlayStation Network, so I thought you need to buy some games online." Max said to Dawn.

"I love it, Max." Dawn said as she give him a hug. Lorcan holds up her birthday present.

"You have one more, I thought you'll love it." Lorcan said as Dawn opens her present. Dawn was shocked and smiled that she got her a Friendship Doll.

"Thank you so much, Lorcan." Dawn said as she give Lorcan a hug.

"You watched the commercial of it last week, so I went over to the store yesterday and bought it." Lorcan said as Dawn smile.

Dawn looks at her present from Lorcan and shocks that it's Sunset Shimmer. "It's Sunset Shimmer. Can I play with it?" She asked Lorcan.

"Oh, sure you can sweetheart." Lorcan answers politely and Dawn opens the box to bring the doll out.

Lorcan reads the instructions to find out how the doll works. "Okay,It says here you gotta sync her knowledge base
to the cloud before he can connect to any other DESTINY products they made with Sony," She said as Dawn sync the doll's knowledge to the cloud.

Just then, Sunset wakes up and sees them. "Hi, I'm Sunset Shimmer. What's your name?" She asked Dawn.

"I'm Dawn." Dawn answers.

Sunset responds to Dawn' name. "It's go great to meet you, Dawn." She smiles before talking. "Let's get to know each other, how old are you?"

"Uh, I'm seven today." Dawn answers before Sunset responding to her age.

"Happy birthday, what a great age." Sunset said smiling before asking another question. "So, tell me, have you got any brothers or sisters?"

"That's my older sister Lorcan Darcy, and that's my big brother Max." Dawn answers to Sunset by introducing Lorcan and Max to her. Sunset turns to them and respond.

"Hi, you two." Sunset greets them.

"Hi, Shimmer-bot." Max greets back.

"Don't mind him, Sunset." Lorcan said while smiling.

"I'll make no to that." Sunset said to Lorcan. "Tell me about you, Lorcan."

"Well um, I have an older twin sister. Her name was Laura-Belle, everyone called her L.B. She died five years ago." Lorcan said to Sunset about herself, even the death of her twin sister.

Sunset respond to that and reveals her sad face. "I'm so sorry to hear that. If at any time you three wanna talk about it, I'll be here for you." She said while giving her a sad smile.

"Whoa, that's very kind of you." Max said while smiling.

"So how about your mom and dad? What are their names?" Sunset asked after changing the subject.

"Well, our dad's Bill, he's an cartoonist and a very nice man. He always work in L.A on his cartoons. And our mom's Lisa, she's a lawyer and a very gentle woman. They're divorced after Laura-Belle died." Dawn answers the question.

Sunset responds to that. "Wow, I guess it's pretty tough for you three, huh?" She said.

"Yeah, Lorcan's been taking care of us. She's acts like that she's our mom." Dawn said to Sunset.

"Aw, that's incredibly sweet thing you did for them, Lorcan." Sunset said to Lorcan, except she wasn't around. "Where is Lorcan, anyway?"

Lorcan was in the bathroom, she pulls the pregnancy test from the back of her jeans. She unzip her zipper before sitting on the toilet. Peeing on the stick and then waiting, she bursts in to devastated tears when she sees the plus sign, now knowing for sure that she is pregnant to her boyfriend's baby.

"Oh no..." Lorcan said in worried and in tears. "Jake..."

Author's Note:

I hope you enjoy this chapter of the story. I want to apologize for copying and pasting, it's because I have no idea how will Sunset dies from. So, I'll work on the next chapter sooner. Thanks for reading.

Comments ( 24 )

Well. I hope you'll find an some that can help you out and fix the prologue.

I hope so too.

9854449
I have a link to a group. https://www.fimfiction.net/group/209880/anon-a-miss go there and see if you can ask for anyone to help you out with your story and fix your prologue.

Ok I no idea what the heck is going on. Why are there Dolls of the Girls why are they selling them Why did that happen?

You just threw in they selling dolls of the girl and no idea what for? how are they famous is this the EG universe or is it another universe all together?

Will you explain thing already?

9855698
Well, the prologue sets in the EG universe and the other one sets in another.

9855751
So are you going to switchback and forth between worlds?

9855762
Well, probably not, only for two more chapters like the news about Sunset's Suicide.

9855785
Please tell me the CMC are exposed as well.

9855826
They will. And they will be punished.

Oh boy a betrayed girl commits suicide and her spirit enters an AI doll and a young preteen gets the same doll on her birthday? This kinda reminds me of a certain killer doll https://thepopinsider.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/12/ChildsPlay.jpg :twilightoops:. This story's pretty good so far cant wait to see what comes next.

9857676
Yeah but this one is different.

9857724
This feels more like an Ashley Too type thing.

9863893
Yeah, that episode's kinda my inspiration.

9870445
You could edit it out and give a brief description of events

I'm confused on what the Sunset doll size is. Is the doll Life sized or the size like in that anime Angelic Layer?

9875787
Well probably life size.

9857676
Agreed though to be fair Chucky was a full blown psychopath before he performed that voodoo transfer. And the alternate Chucky was just screwed over by a disgruntled employee who wanted to take out his company as a final buck you to them over reasons I don't know having not seen the reboot yet. Kinda reminds me of Jurassic Park with that spy and his nephew in the lego series trying to bring the place down for a rival company.

Given that Sunset isn't like Chucky at all, there's no way this can end bad for anyone other than the CMC and they're already gonna get punished cause of obvious reasons.

Is this going to continue?

10368678
It's gonna be delayed for a while.

10599665
Is it? I’m not really an expert on the law.

update it we all want to see more chapters soon:heart:

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