• Member Since 2nd May, 2014
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Mister Phoenix


Since the show over, I'm gone, no more stories from me

Comments ( 21 )

It's a nice story. I like it a lot. Glad you wrote it.

And yes, I did read the whole thing.

But, after a long first day, it seems like he has gotten on their bad side, but after entering a mysterious house, and getting a love potion, maybe this new school year wouldn't be horrible after all.

Uh oh....

So I thought there was gonna be no more stories from you since the show is over lol

I mean that is what your bio says

The three girls quickly left, Spike watched closely seeing Sweetie Belle lip-locked with Scootaloo before switching to Apple Bloom. Spike gave a smirk, before leaving the three of them alone. He just hopes they get a room.

Poor Button Mash is heartbroken.

Why do I get the feeling that Ember and Coloratura are next down the road?

:applejackconfused: ………………. how pontin is that stuff??? and were can I get some?????

Yes make another chapter with ember and rara.

I read the whole thing and I kind of like CMC I've always thought they were cute couple I mean all three but yes I am one of those people that would love to see a Ember and rara story

Glad to see another story from you.

'The love potion. I must have accidentally pour it into my drink and… Wait, why the fuck am I thinking about this when I could be fucking my new girlfriends'

The first smart thing Spike has said in this entire story.

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Well in short... I'm a fucking lier. I never had any ideas and spark that could go into my head.

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Well, it is good to see your still making stories...I think?.... you are one hell of an author.

Great story! And I do hope you do the second with ember and rara!

This was a hot piece of work

Don't worry it wasn't much that ended in the trash, it was just part of the sex
But it was pretty enjoyable nonetheless

Second chapter it!!!

Plus I don't think Gabby really wants to move on from Spike.

need to have more !!!!!!!!!!

I'll wait for part two

You realize that since you left it hanging with Gabby, Rara, and Ember, there has to be some closure at least for those three...Rara's simiar to Starlight, Ember is pretty much Sunset Shimmer, and I guess Gabby would be with Trixie, though I would swap for Trixie and Rara as a pair since they're both performers, as well as Starlight and Gabby since both have had feelings for Spike since beyond college (Starlight crushing since preschool; Gabby was Spike's ex but they broke off on good terms).

I hope there is a part two...it almost writes itself as far as the scenario...:twilightsmile:

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Don't hold your breath. I haven't been in a writing mood, plus I have been a little sick, makes writing hard. Plus, I want to make my own original story.

I’m confused. How does the love potion work?

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