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GivingSpider


"Any religion that allows or commands you to pass judgement on, convert by force, or kill another human being is not a religion that serves any interpretation of any God or Gods above." Unknown

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It's always quite delightful to see gentle Fluttershy show her wild side and completely enrapture Discord. She really does understand him more than anyone else.

Very nicely done!

9861843
This was good. Now you need to push the envelope further. Having Fluttershy tease Discord in public to see how far she can push before he does something would fit the teasing theme you have set.

9863408
A very risky and risque game considering he prefers not to risk exposing his true self in a public setting yet is the preferred state for naughty fun.

9863936
With his powers it'd be pretty simple for him to do something even with him in his human form. As an example you could have him teaching a class and she keeps doing stuff to distract him and after she pushes his buttons enough he decides to 'fight back' so to speak. So while he's facing the class a hand behind the back into the discreet snap of the fingers next thing you know her panties are gone under the skirt that sits just above her knees. That kind of thing and where are they push buttons like that through most of the chapter until all culminates in both of them in like a closet or the bathroom or something like that to where he's getting her back for everything they've done. Also his magic could work there as well because if they're in a closet he can snap his fingers and make the closet pretty much stay jammed shut and he could constantly talk about the possibility of them getting caught driving her wild and Just as they're reaching the edge they can have a janitor wiggle the knob to try to get in and that shock that someone's there pushes Fluttershy past the point of no return and she pretty much climaxes right there. I'm not saying you have to do it exactly this way but just the idea that his magic could open up a whole lot of kinky doors beyond what they've done so far is an interesting thought to explore.

9864375
Sounds like you thought this through :moustache:

9864510
that's something I actually thought of off the top of my head the problem is I can't write the story out to save my life.

9864572
I'll consider trying something like that

9864600
Glad I could help with a possible idea. :twilightsmile:

I love this whole series. I use to come back to the first and read it over and over. The idea is her finding him and the way it's described I could seriously picture every scene in my head. I love that these shorts are following after one another and expanding the story as a whole. Excited to read more!

WOW
This is one of my favorite chapter of the entire serie. I wonder what you have planned for the next part.😏😏
But well, great story and can't wait for see more 😍😍😍😍.

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