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BROLY MUI


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This story is inspired by Equestria Girls Battle of Gods

We have a world where Universe 7 was in perish millions of planets started to explode including Earth and Vampa as Goku and Broly lost everything and one of those explosions pushed Goku and Broly to another world and our heroes seem to have no idea where their are as now they have more problems to work with. This takes place after DBS Broly and during MLP EG Rainbow Rocks.

Saga 1 Power of Saiyan Gods
Saga 2 The Return of Turles
Saga 3 Universal Friendship Conflict
Saga 4 Legend of Everfree and Return of Black
Saga 5 Xeno saga
Saga 6 The Demon Janemba
Saga 7 Frieza’s Revenge
Saga 8 The Ultimate Ancient Saiyan
Saga 9 Battle of Omni Gods
Saga 10 Saiyan's last fight

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 42 )
Comment posted by BROLY MUI deleted Sep 29th, 2019

9862920
I should specify more that the of Broly’s height. I say that in Ikari he is like 7 feet tall as in super saiyan as well, in LSSJ he is 9.10 feet tall

9862892
Yeah I’ll keep Broly and Goku’s height as Goku is 5’8 or 5’10 as Broly is like 6’3 as he is smaller than the original

9864300
Plus Goku is between 5’8 and 5’10 in DBS like I said before

9864482
He is 9’10 when he is in his LSSJ not in his base or wrath or SSJ and is pretty obvious when he isn’t transformed he is a a little taller than Goku but not exaggerated taller as Goku reaches to Broly’s shoulder when he’s not transformed as when he is transformed into LSSJ he barely reaches his torso maybe less so Broly is a little taller than Goku as in with the girls Goku is a tall dude but smaller than Principal Celestia as Broly in his base is already a giant to the girls and he has the same height as Principal Celestia.

9864920
I know it says 9'10 but that is his legendary form, I'm just saying that he is like 6'3 feet tall

9876076
I know but remember Broly is already transformed in Wrath which he can barely control it as if he goes full wrath he may lose control, plus Broly is not trained so he doesn’t know how to regain control of himself from magic, he’ll just become the demon that destiny wants him to be.

9875978
Goku’s instant transmission can be used to go from place to place but not reality to reality plus, Whis took him 6 hours or more to arrive to Equestria

This story is awsome i am reading the ornginl one and i like the twist . Altretn time line and differt events. The equestria girls battle of gods one is awsome i like how you put youre own twist in it. Keep it up.

Nice touch on the chapter. Wow useing what friezza did to pagures. You should add ultimte battle when they fight or some other epic battle muisc.

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That is something that I should work with as Broly is not a god but he has legendary power so I don’t know if I can make him an alicorn just because he doesn’t have divine power but his power already matches a destroyers, so yeah don’t know what to do with him. Vegeta and Goku are alicorns like you said as they have divine power

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Of course you are, this is a true battle of saiyans with power levels equal or beyond a destroyers so you’ll see a lot of destruction over all this fight and maybe that’s just a taste of what I’ll do in the next episode

Now that awsome i like how you changes goku gi and showing the image. You should add ultimre dor the backround muisc to make this fiht like the top arc style.

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I'm already making ep 11 and I obviously I will add ultimate battle theme, is such a masterpiece I can't make the final battle without it.

Comment posted by pika_the_sylveon deleted Aug 1st, 2020

That giant ki balst is called a planet crusher

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Of course I’m not going to kill Goku or Broly and I’m planing as Broly is a good person, his cutie mark is a heart but when he goes LSSJ I’m planing that his cutie mark will change because he is like a complete different person, more like a devil logo

9927632
And Broly is as high as Princess Cadence but when he is in LSSJ I think that I’ll make him bigger than Princess Celestia

9927986
Well the thing is that if I make Broly always in his Legendary Form, he would be almost always berserk

9928290
No... Broly can barely control his Wrath form but not his full wrath form

9928470
I’m making a chapter for my new story Equestria Girls Under the Red Hood so it will take a while plus with all my works of school, is getting harder to make episodes but I promise that I will finish this story

Get make broly more powerful that sounds like a good idea for Kieran to fight against.

9973116
I am sort of, but I’m making him stronger cause his adaptation is far grater and while his learning to use his powers, he’s gaining strength to even equal Jiren but his limit breaker is the power than can almost equal Jiren limit breaker

Not a bad start, lots of miss used words and some spelling errors but overall, not bad.

I would certainly advise in getting this fic edited. There are numerous missed used words and the structure in some areas makes it hard to read. Other than that, not bad.

I can finally read this now that watched the movie. Hell yeh

That moment you see canceled before the explanation :pinkiegasp:

“Let me explain to you Ms Applejack. A God of Destruction are some powerful gods, who they have the duty to destroy anything that comes around him, but if a destroyer fights another destroyer, they could erase an entire universe. Lord Beerus and Broly cannot fight in the outside world, because even though Broly isn’t a destroyer, he had the power to rival one, and with one destroyer and one mortal who is capable of rivaling a destroyer can maybe destroy the universe as well. That’s why I sent them to The World of Void, a reality with no end.” said Whis as the girls were left confused.

Seriously, even with Whis explaining it. The Main Six are STILL CONFUSED???!!! They can't be this dumb, or obliviously stupid! :facehoof:

Where your story!?

10668894
It got revoked accidentally, it will come back in a few minutes.

10668897
Thank you, otherwise I started to get scared.(Rus-Eng)

10668897
Hope you watch those YouTube channels I dropped for you?(Rus-Eng)

10668897
Where your story equestria girls super?

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Yeah I had some problems and had to rewrite some chapters, I’m already rewriting the last one, if lazyness doesn’t get the best of me then today will come back promise

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