Name says enough. Favorite character is Darth Vader and I don't know what I am doing half the time.
A new 10 year old griffon comes to town who likes to build stuff.
He also attends school with Apple Bloom which both of them are partnered for a school project that is due at end of the school year.
They end up deciding to build a fully functional aircraft (which will be classified as an ultralight aircraft).
They think it will be nothing special will come out of it but the future tells a different story.
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I like it a lot but the way the characters talk to eachother feels off. It's like english is their second language. I'm still gonna add it to my tracking because it has great potential.
9846584
Thanks you and bye the way, English is my First Languagw and don’t you mind if you explain what “off” means.
Thanks.
9847742
Some sentences are short and leaves out prepositions and use incorrect articles. such as
is missing the preposition "to" and how in
the "a" should be an "an", which are common mistakes in non-fluent English speakers as well as the sentences being said in conversations are very short and direct, giving their conversations an artificial feel and not feeling genuine.
9847742
I'm no writer though so I would recommend joining the School for New Writers group for advice.