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CelestianCrusader


You're a bad boy. Go to my room. This is an alt account. I do write non-fetish fics. Just to make that perfectly clear, Darlings.

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Twilight usually gets in trouble when she doesn't go to the potty. But sometimes, accidents are unavoidable.

Contains: Diapers, spanking reference. If you dislike these things, you'd be better off not reading this.

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I enjoyed this story. But, I agree with you. Having public bathrooms out of order is a problem. It's a huge problem.

It's a really simple but adorable story :twilightsmile: I liked so much how little Twily spoke and how excited she was for going to the park and being a big filly making it to the bathroom. :pinkiehappy: So sad that she was unable to do so :fluttershysad:

And talking about the thing of the parks. Where I live parks don't even have bathroom so I'm completely with you :rainbowhuh:

This is okay, but I'm not really sure if spanking is necessary for potty training. Most children that undergo it are still learning when they have to go, and sometimes they don't always realize the signs right away. They don't mean to do it.

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Well, Velvet wouldn't have threatened it had Twilight gone immediately instead of chasing after a butterfly. She wasn't listening.

9847993 Is spanking really necessary in that case? The child would probably learn the consequence of not going when they need to by having the accident. It's not like they did something like crossing the street without a grown-up or wandering off on their own.

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Probably not, but this is a fantasy, not rl. (And she'll be less likely to wander off into the street if she knows not listening has consequences.)

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On second thought, I did decide to alter it a bit. Velvet didn't spank to potty train, but since Twilight now knows going to the potty is an established rule she will spank if Twilight doesn't go. That was my original intent, but it didn't quite come across like I wanted.

Little Twily was trying so hard. Even though she couldn't hold it, her effort was still respectable. Velvet goofed by forgetting her potty, but she was very understanding of how hard this whole thing was for her. Overall, it was a sweet and cute story.

And on the author's note, I imagine a somepony is getting fired over the out of order bathroom problem.

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Also, thanks for commenting.

Twilight rested on the grey surface and lifted her back legs. Velvet pulled them down and discarded them into the trash before pulling out another pair

This painted a strange picture in my mind

Cute, adorable, and the bathroom being out of order part is relatable XD. And I thought that the men’s bathroom was bad… . Literally the women’s bathroom gets out of order too? Wow that’s hilarious XD.

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It’s probably gray stones you see at the park

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