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I want nothing more than to bring a smile to your face with a light-hearted clopfic! If you want to bring a smile to mine, leave a comment!

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Yeah, seeing a SFW story being posted by Clops? I was worried
Glad to see Clops is still... okay, 'sane' probably isn't the right phrase here-

Aaaaah! It’s too good and adorable!!

Hello again! Enjoying the chapters as I go and answer the author’s question :)

“W-would… you… like to come in?” Trixie asked, unlocking her door and looking hopefully over her shoulder with a blush.

Fireworks exploded in Jot’s mind.

Cue Hallelujiah choir

Trixie blushed slightly and covered her mouth with a hoof. “N-not l-like that! The g-g-great and powerful Tr-Trixie was inviting you in for a cup of tea is all!”

Hallelujah choir slowly dies down then awwww’s....

Hallelujah choir getting ready to pack and leave until they saw the ending......

Hallelujah choir singing INTENSIFIES

Comment posted by Mocha Star deleted Sep 21st, 2019

I love stories with trixie finding love with a oc. :heart:

I already don't like this version of Cadance. To not even give Trixie a single chance at redemption - what a bitch.

Let's see where the story goes.

Definitely enjoyed the SFW preview of this greatly!

Quick question though, are the NSFW chapters the only difference? Or is the entire story slightly different now?

Just asking since I try to avoid reading twice in a row so soon, but also don't want to skip anything important!

She wasn’t even really sure why she’d been so jealous of Princess Twilight. Power? Prestige? The fact that friendship and love seemed to come so quickly to her pseudo-nemesis? As it stood, Twilight was objectively the most beloved pony in Equestria, possibly even surpassing the Princess of Love herself. It wouldn’t be long before Celestia’s favored pupil was smothered in friendship from every nation. And should she wish for it, she probably wouldn’t need to try all that hard to find somepony to start a family with — Trixie had already saved the world upwards of a dozen times, so there’d be no shortage of admirers so long as she stayed in the spotlight.

This I assume is meant to be Twilight. I noticed that the paragraph didn't read quite right.

Personally, I like Trixie always speaking in 3rd person. It is slightly disappointing that she doesn’t here.

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Good catch, thanks!
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You'll notice she's doing that less and less

And here I thought Cadence couldn't get even more evil than denying Trixie love. XD Ah, I loved this! Thank you so much for it. Honestly I kind of wish we'd had a confrontation with Hard Copy but. C'est la vie, what can you do? At least Trixie is getting the love she deserves!

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Love is war. Xena, warrior princess don't forgive.

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Hard Copy was hit by a taxi cab and died off screen.

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Us writers have to stick together and help eachother.

Triplet names:

Abrah Lulamoon
Kah Lulamoon
Dabrah Lulamoon.

He's a heroic horsey! (Also, I totally feel that whole size difference vibe going on Clops, don't even try to hide it.)

I think a chapter disappeared between A Buck to the Gut and Heart to Heart.

I think I accidentally unpublished this chapter???

I must say that I thoroughly enjoyed the characterization of the main characters and had the impression that it meshed well with the cloppy chapters.

As for Cadance, I can see why you chose to depict her in such a manner, but it's also a bit jarring and damn, does she provide a big helping of fridge horror that undercuts the light-hearted tone of the story once it hits. All in all, still a very enjoyable read. Kudos on writing a likeable and three-dimensional Trixie. The same holds true for the (self-insert?) OC.

She’d once described it to her husband as trying to track bubbles in a raging white-water river, not dissimilar from the sea of quantum foam and probabilities that the Empire’s leading physicists were exploring. Every sapient creature in the world fizzed and tumbled in the rapids of circumstance, sometimes colliding and forming a new, greater whole. It had been intimidating at first, trying to navigate the chaos, to choose tiny bubbles from the cacophony and bestow upon them a gift of potent love-magic, ensuring that a new relationship would bloom.

I really like that description! Also, Cadence... :facehoof: uh oh

Comment posted by sxcbeast deleted Sep 26th, 2019

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Thank you sir!

Yes he's a bit of self insert, tis a guilty pleasure.

I loved this one so much. The article was handled so well! So well that I read the whole thing aloud to myself, just for the immersion. :twilightblush:

Trixie will return to being the villain when an investigative reporter from the competing paper (or maybe one under Hard Copy) reveals the scandalous story that Jot was romantically involved with the subject of his story and benefited financially from the increased publicity his article generated for Trixie's show.

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Nuh uh! Because their marriage is gonna be getting page news!

:P

I found this to be a beautiful little romance story despite the bits about Cadence. Jot & Trixie were believable and easily came to life in my mind.

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Forget Trixie. She won't let Twilight fall in love? This Cadence is fixin' for a rainbow maser to the face! :twilightangry2:

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Pfft. Veni, Vidi, and Vici Lulamoon, you mean!

The Great and Powerful Trixie is giving birth to ponies, after all, not Pokemon!

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She's just protective of her sister in law.

Only the best for Twily: Shining Armor or no-pony!

Took me far too long to get around to reading this. It was adorable. :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Tactically Derpy deleted Mar 17th, 2020
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