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nice work.
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Cheers! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
nice work.
Eh, it was nice.My problem was that you repeat too many phrases in this chapter
And this is more than an opinion, but I like gore and emotional horror, and this feels..souless, because we don't know why Cadence and Twilight are acting this way, heck we don't even see Twilight show a bit of remorse in the afterglow.