Ponies... ponies never change. Since the dawn of pony kind, when our ancestors first discovered the path of magic and friendship, of sunshine and rainbows, magic has flooded the world, spreading happiness to all. That all changed a few months after Princess Luna's return from her thousand year imprisonment on the moon. When she returned, something came back with her that slowly started to poison and corrupt the nature of magic, sowing threads of distrust between pony and zebra kind. Eventually, just as it had been born, the magical land of Equestria would die in the rainbow glow of magical energy. Our story, however, takes us far from the deadly wasteland to an island paradise as of yet untouched by the ravages of war. This island, a relic of the old world, has begun to take on a life of its own and is threatening to unleash its deadly secrets upon an unsuspecting world. Now it's up to small band of friends to prevent this horror from spreading; whether they like it or not, their fate has been inextricably tied to the fate of the wasteland itself.
This seems pretty interesting so far. Loved the references to Legend of Zelda cartoon and Rocky Horror Picture Show.
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Thank you! I'm currently working on the fourth chapter.
There are a few errors in this chapter, like entire paragraphs missing. You may want to look it over and edit again.
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Thank you for bring this to my attention. If you spot in more errors like this let me know and I'll fix them up in a jiffy.
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If you spot any*
You really, really need to improve your spelling. Automatic spellchecker doesn't cut it.
Stare well off to the right
ushering us pack in the room
We galloped to the lift cadges.
whose the boss...
Sitting down in the thrown
getting up from the thrown
The other ponies got up from the thrown (aaaargh!)
And total mess concerning there/they're/their, its/it's, your/you're plus a very liberal approach to s/'s
This is really breaking the immersion. Previous chapters weren't as bad but this one was making me groan.
Seems promising. But the chapters are really short...
road the elevator
I’m mean really you life’s work
sounded more timid and horse.
Far enough.
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I'm not seeing the problem concerning its and it's. Its is possessive, and it's is the contraction of it is I used both properly. Concerning the other errors I will reread the chapter to find any grammar and spelling errors I missed the first time around. Thank you for the comment.
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Thank you for pointing out the errors. They have been corrected. Yeah I know my fic's chapters aren't as long as say Kkat's or Somber's, but that's my choice, and my style.
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“Well Silva, I don’t think licking the sheet will kill the taste; I shudder to think where its been.
(this is a contraction of "it has", so it's)
Sorry, but its not going to happen, but you can be 20% cooler and join M.O.A. today!
“I...” ~pant~ “Don’t...” ~wheeze~ “Think...” ~hack~ “That...” ~cough~ “Its...” ~gasp~ “Firing...” ~wobble~ “at...” ~wobble~ “Us...”
It had a fruity, sweet, tangy tasty, and it’s texture was like that of a thick cream.
The interior of the rust bucket they called an office was in much better condition than it’s exterior led me to believe.
As he spoke his right eye moved lazily from Patch to me as the other sat in it’s socket staring blankly
The robot attempted to bring us back onto it’s script.
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I thought you meant just for the fourth chapter. I'll go back and edit the others so that the grammar is correct.
*Edit*
The corrections have been made.
First question does this take place at the of the original?
And second question why does Zhu's Hope sound familiar?
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It's set before the events of Little Pip's adventure.
The name of the town was inspired by Mass Effect.
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Thank ya. The sky opening sounded like the end of it and DUH! 
I should have remembered that mission.
I will continue to write it. I've just been on hiatus do to life issues.
Chapter 6 is in the works.