Ad Victorium!

Equestria is at war and the world around it on fire. Everypony has been efected by the war. Even the young and the innocent aren't safe from the horrors of war. This is the story of those who fought in that war. And in some cases those who died defending what they believed in.

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StormLuna

StormLuna #1 · Sep 18th, 2019 · 1 · 6 ·

Just think of them like they are disgusting rats, or cockroaches, or anything like that! Anything but living, breathing, thinking…

Nazi mentality.

RDDash

RDDash #2 · Sep 18th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Let me guess, all of them die.

Battlefield 1

WordWeaver

WordWeaver #3 · Sep 19th, 2019 · 3 · ·

The feeling of terror I get from this is actually quite impressive. If some of the sentences were structured a little differently to more reflect that (some shorter/more succinct for moments of panic, new paragraphs to add a pace or rhythm), I'd say you'd have something special on your hands.

Still! Quite an interesting read. Things like this always reminds me that war sucks and evokes a strong emotional reaction from me, so I may actually be a little biased to liking this. Keep it up!

Emberblue