Following a review of her Royal Guards, Celestia decides that some changes are in order.
Afterall, the castle could always use more cleaning staff...
Inspired by the series of images by Skitterpone.
Following a review of her Royal Guards, Celestia decides that some changes are in order.
Afterall, the castle could always use more cleaning staff...
Inspired by the series of images by Skitterpone.
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This story is going to be fun to read
DANM!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm looking forward to more of the story.
(Reads description...)
This ought'a be interesting.
All hail Princess Celestia; Firm as iron, but gentle in the aftermath. Firm, but fair.
well..... that escalated quickly
Okay. He's going down.
I really don't take well to disrespectful characters.
However... famous last words and all...
throat
HA! She said it! Especially apropos for those who are somewhat more little than usual
You asked for it, Auburn.
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Here, all Royal Guards are equally worthless.
Casual transformation karma. This is fun.
Augh I need more chapters this is too interesting
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Indeed I want more of this
Reality Ensues: Every pony Celestia does this to resigns. That won't happen here because this isn't that kind of story, which is honestly fine. I just felt somebody should point that out.
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Like ones who use body-altering magic on their underlings without permission, and then act as though it's them who have lessons to learn? It doesn't get much more disrespectful than that.
I enjoy the occasional decently written TG story. I just get irked by the ones where the transformation is involuntary or somehow coerced. Personal preference.
at least now
the royal guard will do something xD
Can you link to the
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Do not confuse the subtext of TG versus TF or R63. Admittedly I haven't read this through yet, but I wanted to respond before you disappeared into the comments.
i was wondering when someone would turn that series into a story
anyone else laugh thinking that was shining armor when they first saw that image?
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The three images can be found here: https://derpibooru.org/search?q=%28+id%3A2031008+%7C%7C+id%3A2043898+%7C%7C+id%3A2092022+%29+%2C+safe
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Thanks
mag abuse much celestia
Glad to see someone doing stories based on these images :)
could be worse. they could never hear of it and start hitting on the adorable new maid
Man, I am liking how this is coming along so far. Keep it up.
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But then they'd definitely be stuck like that, as opposed to the hope she's deliberately dangled in front of them. Actual reality ensuing is that those abusing their higher position make sure those lower than them can't afford to leave, or at least feel that they can't. Otherwise, they aren't going to keep that higher position for very long... and a thousand years is very long.
(Also, only the TF part is truly over the line; reassignment to cleaning duties is a stock punishment for military forces.)
Hey I really like what you did here. I love maid TF as there's barely any fics on this site like this. I hope we get to see the maids get used to their new duties please continue.
I like the premise, but... did she really have to transform them? Like, Jesus, nevermind a likely sudden onslaught of overwhelming gender confusion issues, if they have family boy is it going to be awkward to explain 'Celestia made me into a mare as punishment for being not a great guard,' in any way that sounds like logical or reasonable retribution.
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That's fetish fics for you, I guess...
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I certainly would if I was one of them.
I always enjoy this concept, whether it be in fanfiction or elsewhere on the interwebs.
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Especially if doing certain somethings made the change permanent.
Now for some hunky stallion to hit on Silver Gleam.
This is going to be hilarious!
Hehe, this is adorable.
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How exactly cleaning windows or serving tea is gonna help making him/her a better guard?
Maybe he should have taken his job a bit more serious... But only maybe.
She did't say anything about changing him back into an stallion.
Intentionally?
Interesting premise.
I look forwards to see where it goes.
I may have found an typo:
While anger may work, I believe you meant danger, right?
Ooops... Busted!
If Celestia isn't careful she may run out of guards one day.
Just had another idea what might happen in the future:
An actual female maid complains about the new additions, Celestia hears about it and transformed her into an male guard. (Or something like that.)
For some reason my mind is going celestia is gonna go too far and get whats coming to her and its gonna hit hard when it does.
Loving it already.
Ha, these type of stories.
They take me back to a better place.
Love to see where this goes.
Nothing wrong with just good Transformation fun.
I knew that it's bad to be sleeping on the job, but this takes it to another level xD
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Running out of guards may be the intent of the plan. After all, they've literally never succeeded on-camera...
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well, other than Shining Armor. engaged to a Princess then Prince Consort or not, he was very good with that city wide shield and throwing his wife. also, Twilight had to have learned her offensive spells somewhere and i guarantee it wasn't from sun butt. she probably helped him study for his officer's exam.
How many more introductions do you think you’ll make before just focusing on what happens to them as maids
Calling it: Mirror.
Called it. Mirror.
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Well he is taking inspiration from a short comic series at the moment, there might be one more in the series but after that the story will either be complete, forced to come up with new scenarios, or continue.
Herself, as of now.
Well, gotta look on the bright side.
Yeah, the maid uniform are nice, you don't even have to be a mare to enjoy them.
I wonder how much of the cleaning staff is a rotating crop of misbehaving guards. And how much of it's high echelon is the non-rotating part
Nice.