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Following a review of her Royal Guards, Celestia decides that some changes are in order.

Afterall, the castle could always use more cleaning staff...


Inspired by the series of images by Skitterpone.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 147 )

This story is going to be fun to read

I'm looking forward to more of the story.

(Reads description...)

This ought'a be interesting.

Just when it looked like she might burst out into tears in the middle of the throne room, she felt a hoof on her shoulder. Looking up, she found Princess Celestia looking down at her, a warm smile on her face that instantly made the newly transformed mare feel safer.

“I know this must be hard for you, but I want you to try and see this as a learning experience. If you can show me you can do a good enough job as a maid, then I’ll consider letting you back into the Royal Guards, ok?”

“Good. Now, please report to the maid quarters to receive your new assignments, Silver Gleam. Oh, and do hurry. It wouldn’t do to be late on your first day, now would it?” Celestia said with a. Small titter.

All hail Princess Celestia; Firm as iron, but gentle in the aftermath. Firm, but fair.

well..... that escalated quickly :applejackunsure:

That only prompted Auburn to laugh even harder. “Ha! I always knew you were a big wuss, now you’ve got the clothes to match it. I wouldn’t be caught dead wearing something like that!”

Okay. He's going down. :twilightangry2:

I really don't take well to disrespectful characters.

However... famous last words and all...:ajsmug:

“What?!” Auburn froze at the sound of his, or rather her , voice placing a hoof against his through as he realized that voice had come from him. “Wha…what?”

throat

Looking herself over, Auburn was horrified to find herself wearing a maid’s uniform in place of her golden armor. “Wha what happened to-“

“Good morning, my little ponies,” Celestia greeted as she walked by them, making sure to meet Auburn’s eyes. “I thought I heard somepony insulting the uniforms for the cleaning staff. Perhaps some time spent wearing it will help you better appreciate the uniform more.” Looking to Star Victory, she asked, “Do you have anything to say about the uniforms?”

HA! She said it! Especially apropos for those who are somewhat more little than usual
You asked for it, Auburn. :ajsmug:

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Here, all Royal Guards are equally worthless.

Casual transformation karma. This is fun.

Augh I need more chapters this is too interesting

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Indeed I want more of this

Reality Ensues: Every pony Celestia does this to resigns. That won't happen here because this isn't that kind of story, which is honestly fine. I just felt somebody should point that out.

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Like ones who use body-altering magic on their underlings without permission, and then act as though it's them who have lessons to learn? It doesn't get much more disrespectful than that. :ajsmug:

I enjoy the occasional decently written TG story. I just get irked by the ones where the transformation is involuntary or somehow coerced. Personal preference.

at least now
the royal guard will do something xD

Can you link to the

images by Skitterpone.

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Do not confuse the subtext of TG versus TF or R63. Admittedly I haven't read this through yet, but I wanted to respond before you disappeared into the comments.

i was wondering when someone would turn that series into a story

anyone else laugh thinking that was shining armor when they first saw that image?

Glad to see someone doing stories based on these images :)

Silver Gleam blushed as she turned and walked back towards the throne room doors, still reeling a bit from her sudden transformation and new assignment. Oh, I hope none of the guys hear about this… They’ll never let me hear the end of it!

could be worse. they could never hear of it and start hitting on the adorable new maid

Man, I am liking how this is coming along so far. Keep it up.

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But then they'd definitely be stuck like that, as opposed to the hope she's deliberately dangled in front of them. Actual reality ensuing is that those abusing their higher position make sure those lower than them can't afford to leave, or at least feel that they can't. Otherwise, they aren't going to keep that higher position for very long... and a thousand years is very long.

(Also, only the TF part is truly over the line; reassignment to cleaning duties is a stock punishment for military forces.)

Hey I really like what you did here. I love maid TF as there's barely any fics on this site like this. I hope we get to see the maids get used to their new duties please continue.

I like the premise, but... did she really have to transform them? Like, Jesus, nevermind a likely sudden onslaught of overwhelming gender confusion issues, if they have family boy is it going to be awkward to explain 'Celestia made me into a mare as punishment for being not a great guard,' in any way that sounds like logical or reasonable retribution.

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That's fetish fics for you, I guess...

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I certainly would if I was one of them.

I always enjoy this concept, whether it be in fanfiction or elsewhere on the interwebs.

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Especially if doing certain somethings made the change permanent.

Now for some hunky stallion to hit on Silver Gleam.

This is going to be hilarious!

Hehe, this is adorable. :heart:

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How exactly cleaning windows or serving tea is gonna help making him/her a better guard?

Silver was in a state of shock, flopping down onto her rump as she stared wide-eyed at the black slippers now on her hooves, looking herself over at what her laziness had done to her.

Maybe he should have taken his job a bit more serious... But only maybe.

“I know this must be hard for you, but I want you to try and see this as a learning experience. If you can show me you can do a good enough job as a maid, then I’ll consider letting you back into the Royal Guards, ok?”

She did't say anything about changing him back into an stallion.
Intentionally?


Interesting premise.
I look forwards to see where it goes.


I may have found an typo:

run away at the first sign of anger

While anger may work, I believe you meant danger, right?

Auburn smiled devilishly as he looked down at the mare. “You tell me… Silver Gleam.”

Ooops... Busted!


If Celestia isn't careful she may run out of guards one day.

Just had another idea what might happen in the future:
An actual female maid complains about the new additions, Celestia hears about it and transformed her into an male guard. (Or something like that.)

For some reason my mind is going celestia is gonna go too far and get whats coming to her and its gonna hit hard when it does.

Loving it already.

Ha, these type of stories.

They take me back to a better place. :raritycry:

Love to see where this goes.

Nothing wrong with just good Transformation fun. :raritywink:

I knew that it's bad to be sleeping on the job, but this takes it to another level xD

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Running out of guards may be the intent of the plan. After all, they've literally never succeeded on-camera...

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well, other than Shining Armor. engaged to a Princess then Prince Consort or not, he was very good with that city wide shield and throwing his wife. also, Twilight had to have learned her offensive spells somewhere and i guarantee it wasn't from sun butt. she probably helped him study for his officer's exam.

How many more introductions do you think you’ll make before just focusing on what happens to them as maids

Hmm? Slowly stirring from his nap, Polar Ace rubbed at his tired eyes, blinking away the lingering sleep from his eyes. He could just make out a fuzzy figure standing infront of him, a blob of black, grey and ice blue. Hang on… He thought as his body began to awaken bit by bit. Nopony else is supposed to be here…

Calling it: Mirror. :ajbemused:

“H-hey! This is a restricted area!” Polar barked, his voice sounding oddly high-pitched all of a sudden. “You can’t–“ As Polar reached out his hoof, the mare did the same, the two connecting with a light *thunk*.

“Oh,” was all Polar Ace could say as she realized that the mare standing infront of her was her own reflection, somepony having placed a mirror nearby while she slept. That wasn’t the only thing they’d done though, as the mare was now dressed in a maid’s outfit, her once short mane having grown out considerably.

Called it. Mirror. :ajbemused:

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Well he is taking inspiration from a short comic series at the moment, there might be one more in the series but after that the story will either be complete, forced to come up with new scenarios, or continue.

Lowering her head in shame, Polar Ace reluctantly began the long walk across the castle towards the maid quarters, mentally chastising himself. At least the uniforms are comfy…

Herself, as of now.
Well, gotta look on the bright side.

Yeah, the maid uniform are nice, you don't even have to be a mare to enjoy them.

I wonder how much of the cleaning staff is a rotating crop of misbehaving guards. And how much of it's high echelon is the non-rotating part :rainbowwild:

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