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James Pwyll

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Having succeeded in their task of convincing the dragon to leave his mountain home, Twilight and her friends are of course delighted that things are getting back to normal. But shortly after their return to Ponyville, the young unicorn gets a surprise visit from the heroine of the hour, Fluttershy, who has something she needs to ask her.

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That was so random I was waiting for Pinkie Pie to show up. I love it.

"It doesn't. The monster just lives next to it, not in it."


Spike: Um Twilight, why didn't you tell her about the cockatrice mating grounds and the swamp with trees that can turn you into a tree.

Twilight: Hmm must have slipped my mind.

"Perhaps you should have told her he only eats Ponies when The Stars are Right and that's another seven hundred years from now?"
"Well, yes, Spike, but the smell is just unbelievable."

I missed Season 1 & 2 Twilight and Spike, sometimes. Some much like Rick & Morty on their best days.

Fun story, good job!:moustache::fluttershyouch::twilightsmile:

Felt like I was watching a seesaw going up & down with what Twi was putting Flutters thought here, just hilarious! :rainbowlaugh:

Spike, glancing from one mare to the other, smirked a little before gulping down the last of his own drink. "Well, this was nice, right?"

:rainbowlaugh: Love stories with good Spike commentary.

...If it's that close to Ponyville, the Pit of Horror should be common knowledge. As well as its curse and Cold-killers. Then again, I guess Fluttershy doesn't really get out much, and would actively avoid anything called the "Pit of Horror"...

...And here I thought in the episode Twilight had just been talking about avoiding a path that wasn't going to take them where they needed to go, or at least go through rougher terrain that would've been harder for them to travel over. Shows what I know. :rainbowlaugh:

It is very silly and fun. I love it.

Random Silliness (without Pinkie Pie), Nostalgia from Season 1, and very laid back commentary. I like this. Well done, you get a :twilightsmile: from me.

Sloggosh-Maggoth is Pinkie’s offspring from what mortals call the future. Prove me wrong.

Not necessarily--I know of landmarks like that similarly close to my own home town that people who have lived in this town most if not all of their whole lives didn't realize were there. It really depends on how much of a public attraction it is--which the Pit of Horror sounds like it is NOT. :raritywink:

Surely there'd be some sort of "don't go here, here's why" PSA, though...
...Then again, this is Ponyville we're talking about. The Everfree Forest is right next door. The Pit of Horror might not even merit a mention by comparison... Although Sloggosh-Maggoth probably should...

In comparison to everything else that happens in and around Ponyville, the Pit of Horror probably seems like no big deal to get excited over. :rainbowlaugh:


That's another thing from the early seasons: Pinkie used to be not just random, but at times downright surreal. It's been years since I've seen her do stuff like inflate her head to float away from a boring speech.

D48 #18 · Nov 27th, 2019 · · 9 ·

The dynamic with Spike was very well done and really did a great job of capturing the feel of the show before Faust got the boot and everything went to shit. Unfortunately, that was just a sideshow to the main exchange between Twilight and Fluttershy which was extremely predictable and really dragged the story down overall.

I hear the abomination is nice enough to hand out free frogurt.

With this kind of randomness shenanigans, it makes you wonder what the Pink one is doing while this is happening?

You misspelled one word.. Futtershy should've said ; Please tell ME about the....You have it reading; Please tell BE... But other than that it's perfect...


With this kind of randomness shenanigans, it makes you wonder what the Pink one is doing while this is happening?

She's probably out shopping for shitloads of board games, balloons, unspoiled beating hearts, still-living pickled brains, and party blowers. Do you have any idea how hard it is to find sufficient entertainment for a Sloggosh-Maggoth's birthday party? :pinkiehappy:

9962860 Thanks for pointing it out :twilightsmile:

I think this might, quite possibly, be the silliest thing I've ever written :pinkiehappy:

Trust me, Sweetheart, you've barely scratched the surface of the fandom's abyss of silliness

It's a light read, silly story, and fun puns I would like to see in a comic.

Do what you're doing, it's great!:pinkiehappy:

I think that she didn't tell Fluttershy about the swamp with trees that could turn her into a tree because of this:

Fluttershy would probably seek the swamp out in order to become a tree.

I needed this after reading https://www.fimfiction.net/story/442989/the-waiting-doom. I was starting to despair over the intelligence of humanity, as https://www.fimfiction.net/story/442989/the-waiting-doom is not a comedic story, and yet it is tagged with the comedy tag. Thankfully, though, it appears that my fears were unfounded, as this story was hilarious.

But I hear that the frogurt is also cursed...

It does come with a free topping.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: The heck?!

Most excellent.

I love all the silly misdirection you did here. Wonderfully entertaining.

Yet, is the topping not also (also) cursed? :trixieshiftright:

Splendid! :rainbowlaugh: :yay:

Random Lovecraft reference is the best one!

Nice to see a story like this that follows the rule of threes. Good work, cute story.

You sound like an absolute joy to be around.

And this wasn't tagged 'Comedy?' WHYYYYYYYYY?

9965630 Because I wasn't sure how many people would actually find it funny :twilightsheepish:

Random and funny, yeah, it is a nice little story. :rainbowlaugh:

Thanks for the work, dear author! Please keep on!:twilightsmile:

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