• Member Since 23rd Aug, 2015
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KorenCZ11


Average brony obsessing over the main cast with an unhealthy desire to see them in a dark fantasy setting.

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Applejack feels like everypony is leaving her behind. She talks through it with Dash over cider.

Written for ROBCakeran53's first Quills and Sofas Speed writing contest.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 4 )

This was so good.

9827893
:ajsmug: I appreciate that. These things don't always come out as well as they can, but this one is probably the exception.
Which means I'm doomed for failure for the foreseeable contests.

All the black humor and suicide jokes felt a bit out of place. It seemed to me like they were just shoved into the story to be edgy.

But aside from that it’s a good and interesting look inside Applejack’s head.

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I'm gonna go with personal taste here, especially considering that the two of them are clearly adults (if you can piece it together, Applejack specifically is 25) and drinking in the barn on some unspecific night. What can I say? I like dark humor.

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