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A pink thunder of love

Over the last 3 years, Pinkie Pie's emotions about Rainbow Dash have been torturing her. But when Rainbow Dash makes a shocking announcement to all of her friends, Pinkie Pie finds herself in a very difficult situation.

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Crimson Dawn

Crimson Dawn #1 · Sep 11th, 2019 · · ·

Well congratulations on publishing and for a first time it is not bad. I do think the idea of starting it as a flashback and then immediately going on to the rest of the story is not needed at least as far as I can tell. You could have just started the story after her thinking back and nothing would change.

That being said for a first time this is actually pretty nice and I especially like the PinkieDash.