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JustaninnocentPony


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My name is Rainbow Dash, and this is my passion. I always love flying, and I make an effort to fly almost every day. And... When no ones looking, I can get very in-depth and thoughtful about it. How lame, right?! But, then again... I can't help it. Not when i'm up in the sky, surrounded by all the beauty and all of my awesomeness. I can't help but crack a smile when I'm up here.

Up here with Me and My Sky.

Image by: http://sonicrainboom93.deviantart.com/
Heavily based off of this animation and song: http://swomswom.deviantart.com/#/d5ax4pb (Song is Owl City - Take To The Sky)

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Comments ( 6 )

Hi,
This is such a great read though there is one error "Without warning, my legs kick off the cloud and my wings extend, beginning to beat quickly as I take off. It’s almost as if my body as a mind of my own as it takes me higher and higher into the sky, and the ground shrinks below me."
I think you meant "it's almost as if my body has a mind of it's own", but other than that it was such a great fanfic and thank you for sharing your creative mind.
Mist Chaser

Hi there,
Your AMAZING! After reading that I was simply blown away and it makes me want to a fic for Rainbow Dash.Your a brilliant writer and you seem to have tons of experience. I wish I was half as good as you. But that`s because I haven`t discovered my style yet. It`s like when a pony gets their cutie mark, it takes a long time. But is clear to me you`ve discovered your unique, one of a kind style of writing. And you should be proud. :raritystarry:

Keep Moving Forward
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Sparkle Writer :twilightsmile:

"You can take my love, you can take my land
You can take me where I cannot stand
You can't take the sky from me
You can't take the sky from me!
You can send me out into the black
You can tell them I ain't comin' back
Burn the land and boil the sea
You can't take the sky from me
You can't take the sky from me"

I just think that the chorus of Mal's Song from "Firefly" really does fit the way you portray Rainbow Dash in this story.

As much as I do not like the fact that she seems to not care about her friends anymore, the story itself, was fantastic, I would rate it at a 4.95 out of 5, that 0.05 because She seems to not care about her friends anymore, but for some reason, it just works, so I only took 0.05 off the rating, good work, Its a fantastic story and I hope to see more like it coming from you.

Thumbed up, Fav'd, Following.

The highest 'barrier' is actually the light barrier I believe, not the sound barrier.
In fact I believe that the sound barrier is actually the lowest one, or at least one of the lower ones.
Not to mention the fact that attempting to make any sound when past that barrier will do absolutely nothing. When you're past the sound barrier it is as quiet as it can possibly get, on your end anyway. You won't hear anything. the other people around the area will though.
Still, an okay story though.

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