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Noodlezss


Just a fellow writer here who loves the all chaotic Noodle boi. I enjoy writing stories and creating artwork <3

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Discord comes by to Fluttershy's house, only to find that she is not well.

As her friend, he honors himself the duty of keeping her company, and exceeding her responsibilities on his own accord...

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“Oh Lord of milkshakes.

Who is this lord of milkshakes :twilightsheepish:

"I shall return." With that, the Lord of chaos vanished in a cloud of pink smoke, off to complete his "quest".

Discord, the great lord of chaos, shall return to complete his quest your highness :twilightsmile:

It's a little flowery but that is more of a personal preference than an actual issue. Otherwise, it was a nice light and fluffy read

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The lord of milkshakes is the lord of milkshakes :ajsmug: who knows, it could be Discord using himself as a term like that. Honestly think he has an ego enough to do so ! xD but again, I suppose we'll never know. Or will we? :duck:

“Oh Lord of milkshakes,

Haha lol Lord of Milkshakes, this is a good oneXD! I'll have to remember this one;)

So happy to help you, even just a tiny bit, in this great little story of yours^^ <3 Just the kind of story to brighten my day & bring out the warm shipping fuzzies in this Fluttercord loving heart of mine <3 Keep up the good work with your writing, I can't wait to see what you will come up with next:)

It's a cute read, and nicely written. It's nice to come across a fanfic that has been edited. You have some nice descriptions. However, it's pacing is a bit slow at the beginning, especially since your audience already knows that Fluttershy is sick based on your blurb.

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