You know I was just thinking do we have a story showing the beginning of our wayward human. Then you hit me with a flashback chapter. It's like you're in my mind
Whether you're using speech recognition software or typing by hand, one should still proof read their work and eliminate any errors they find. I commend you for using something that works for you, but I find the QA (quality assurance) to be lacking.
9938110 I would have thought it apparent but I do indeed proofread. The explanation was more in regards to the nature of the mistakes made and an acknowledgement of the time with which I have to correct them. There's also the fact that I am human and therefore flawed, not possessing an outside perspective when in the editing process means that there are bound to be mistakes made in both the writing process and the correction of it.
10041400 I'm not British (born and raised in Las Vegas) I do however thank you for the compliment. As for the paragraph length, I write as to what feels natural to me.
10098428 This particular chapter as well as the others are a retelling from Celestia's perspective, unless specified otherwise. Now though they are from Celestia's point of view there is a certain flare in description and scene. In the case of this chapter (Pandora's Symphony) and what I'm sure to be more, is an interpretation of the information presented to Celestia. Eyewitness testimonies, reports and files and others of the like are sources of information to be interpreted by whatever perspective the story happens to be telling at the time.
You know I was just thinking do we have a story showing the beginning of our wayward human. Then you hit me with a flashback chapter. It's like you're in my mind
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Im glad I could provide.
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"Open your mind"
Whether you're using speech recognition software or typing by hand, one should still proof read their work and eliminate any errors they find.
I commend you for using something that works for you, but I find the QA (quality assurance) to be lacking.
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I would have thought it apparent but I do indeed proofread. The explanation was more in regards to the nature of the mistakes made and an acknowledgement of the time with which I have to correct them. There's also the fact that I am human and therefore flawed, not possessing an outside perspective when in the editing process means that there are bound to be mistakes made in both the writing process and the correction of it.
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I apologise if I came on as holier-than-thou or antagonising.
I just felt a need to let you know.
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You needn't apologize, all is well.
Okay:
Very long, And deep paragraphs.
An overly calm MC.
And an engimatic plot....
You're british aren't you sir?
Or a very good writer. (the way you constructed the first two chapters reminded me of Daniele Steele's and Tom Clancy's books
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I'm not British (born and raised in Las Vegas) I do however thank you for the compliment. As for the paragraph length, I write as to what feels natural to me.
Is this a general flashback story driven or Celestia is somehow showing this to the pinkie, Twi and flutters?
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This particular chapter as well as the others are a retelling from Celestia's perspective, unless specified otherwise. Now though they are from Celestia's point of view there is a certain flare in description and scene. In the case of this chapter (Pandora's Symphony) and what I'm sure to be more, is an interpretation of the information presented to Celestia. Eyewitness testimonies, reports and files and others of the like are sources of information to be interpreted by whatever perspective the story happens to be telling at the time.