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Hopeful_Ink_Hoof


[He/Him] Just a writer who likes MLP and hopes to make a living off it: https://ko-fi.com/ink_hoof

Comments ( 36 )

Booo condoms!

Other than that, great story!

How did you read my minds?

Not bad. A little more details with condom usage then I care for (slowed down the action), but other then that, good read.

Nice job!:moustache:

I've been waiting for this and I can say I'm happy as spike.

Title has "Raw" in it: uses a condom.
0/10
Just kidding. It was pretty good, though my deviant mind was a bit sad she was flat, even if she's a reptile.

THIS ISN'T EVEN ANTHRO!
THEY'RE BOTH FUCKIN DRAGONS!
THEY ALREADY HAVE HUMANOID BODY-TYPES!

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Nah, they're anthro. Here, anthro is being used as an excuse to make wearing clothes standard and expected.

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that could be done without making it anthro
it's called alternate universe

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That's a way, but it's not the way the author chose.

9823961
it's still fuckin stupid

Nice to see some safe sex practices. Great story, love their dynamic.

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No, because they have different implications for the way dragons look. Being anthro doesn't simply mean being a biped.

Safe sex... Not my style but
Well I basically drowned my account in derpybooru with smolder wearing clothes panties or nothing so...
Pretty much direct favorite

After a busy day, Spike finds Smolder in his room, dressed in a cheerleader outfit. And the dragoness is in quite a mood. One she was Spike to help her out with.

in the description, was needs to be changed to wants

Rah Rah Rasputin, lover of the Russian queen

Saw raw in title ok... uses protection... I am like wtf this isnt raw.

After a busy day, Spike finds Smolder in his room, dressed in a cheerleader outfit. And the dragoness is in quite a mood. One she wants Spike to help her out with.

She then eats Spike and makes out with the much more handsome Gallus and Sandbar? ... the end :3

Comment posted by Undead Equestrian Writer deleted Sep 17th, 2019

Enjoyable story.

Still I can’t help but wonder what would happen if Garble found out about this.

Pony porn should be banned!

Fake like fake comments.

I don't gettit.

Quite steamy and most excellent.

This was great. Thank you.

Thumbs-up and a positive comment for the condoms, because f**k the haters.

What's next, Smolder invites Ocellus to join with Spike and suddenly his pen pal Gabby voluntary join in after that?

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No. If I were to continue it, the chapters would be (in no particular order): Gallus and Ocellus; Yona and Sandbar; and Shimmy Shake and Lightfoot.

Ugh... outside the condom message that kinda killed it, the story is awesome. I get the purpose and support it.

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Somehow, that makes me think "Ra ra ah-ah-ah-ah. Ra-ma ra-ma-ma-a, Gaga oh lala. Want your Bad Romance."

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For some reason, she didn't join the cheer squad in "2-4-6- Great!"

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I want your ugly, I want your disease, I want your everything as long as it's free

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Ah, that's right. For some reason I though you forgot her or something.

I liked this one! I hope that there’s gonna be another chapter with more sexy cheerleader shenanigans. I’m also wondering if there’ll be an alternate version of this story where Smolder has breasts?

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